So much about this has been better than what happened on the show. God bless.

I really like your story! Well minus Rhaegals death! I was really hoping he made it! Will there still be an epilogue?

Pls keep going with this story

Quite like the story. Just wondering are you going to continue writing more chapters?

Awesome chapter!

This chapter was a mess.. did someone else adopt your story or something cause I can see you trying to keep up with the stupidity of the show and it's quite disappointing.

Hmm, I’ve been really liking this story, but this chapter seemed really disjointed and like it belonged to a different story. I have to agree with the Bacon reviewer on everything he or she said. Why change the direction of your story just because of the way the show went? This is fanfiction and I can guarantee that anything you had in mind before you saw what D&D cooked up is by far superior. Very much hoping you change your mind.

*glad, not God!

“You will return Casterly Rock to Lannister control. You will surrender your murderous whore of a sister to my justice," she looked at Tyrion, her eyes blazing, "as well as my imp of a sibling. Once these terms are met I will order my men to stand down from the defense of King's Landing."

I know it doesn’t really matter because Cersei is dead anyway, but she would have already known Joffrey was poisoned by Olenna Tyrell by now, not Tyrion and Sansa, wouldn’t she? Either way, I’m glad she’s dead. At least she won’t be able to betray them. God Jaime was the one who did it too...

Whew that was a great fight, poor Rheagal and Jorah

Noooooo... not Rhaegal

First of all, why the hell would you wish to take your story in a different direction? Have you no imagination to provide yourself with an original plot? Must you ride off the back of the events of the show? Preposterous. A good writer doesn't let outside influence affect the story he/she creates.

Second of all, this chapter was really subpar if I'm being completely honest. It's as if you gave up on this story and spit out the chapter for the sake of getting it over with. There was practically no originality, it was incredibly rushed, Rhaegal's death was just dumb and unnecessary, and the Night King was treated just as poorly as in the show (didn't getting any meaningful backstory or explanation for his motivations and the dozens of questions surrounding the Others/White Walkers, and a freaking dragonglass dagger somehow killing him when dragonfire didn't). Overall, there are so many problems with this chapter, it feels like it was written by a completely different person. I don't understand how the writing abilities that went into the previous chapters are the same ones that popped out this one.

I'm disappointed.

Write more soon please.

ah the typical use dragon flame on steel.

And the Dawn will come soon. Love the story. Please update soon :D