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naia1 chapter 6 . 6/30 plz update!i really love this story !plz! |
Knaruto chapter 6 . 5/30 so good. I like the self growth and reflection between everyone. it's so sad it's not continued since. and the fluff and sap will just kill me |
naqiah chapter 6 . 5/21 I hope you could find the time and inspiration to continue this story! I love it! Please continue. |
princecharlesthe69th chapter 6 . 5/7 I absolutely love this story. Honestly one of the best Drarry and Wolfstar fics out there. Which is why i really really really really wanna see it completed. I'm gonna go insane imagining different scenarios that might happen. At first I thought that this fic would just be porn without plot but no oh no its not. The story line is extremely interesting and I love it. I was so embarrassed for Harry and Draco when they walked in on that order meeting oh my god that was horrific, but also extremely amusing after I got over how embarrassing it was. Please please please update! I really wanna see what happens at Hogwarts and what the school's reaction will be to Harry and Draco. |
HoneyBear84 chapter 6 . 4/15 Love it so far and seriously hope you will start updating it again someday soon |
Jensindenial3516 chapter 6 . 2/12 Loved it, thanks! |
Jensindenial3516 chapter 1 . 2/11 Loved it! |
hpk1220 chapter 6 . 12/6/2019 Love love love! When will it be complete? |
The weird kids chapter 5 . 12/1/2019 Wow, you’ve spent so much time and dedication writing this fanfic. Good job. |
Lojuba chapter 3 . 11/7/2019 I understand what you tried to do here. Sirius needed to grow as a character to accept them in some capacity. But realistically speaking (I know, I know it's a fanfic wtf am I trying to do) you can't lecture someone into growing as a person. Experiences make people. It would have been a lot more interesting if Remus had reminded Sirius of some key event that made him turn his back on his family and then have Harry or Draco react with a few (like three tops) poignant and honest sentences. Besides Sirius could have related to his cousin on his own, without the moment being used as a plot device to further show the depth of the Starry relationship. The idea that they can be this open with their sex life is also a bit over the top, as is the depth of their emotions. You based all of this on mutual attraction in the first cjapter, but then you immediately said it was clear that it would mean more to both of them from the start. I just think you are forcing your characters into playing roles without developing them to get there? Like you write all this emotional depth into scenes that shouldn't make them feel that way. Because of this the story feels all over the place to me. But I like their playful interactions, when they are not purposefully set up to shock everyone with their sexuality/relationship/deep love for one another. |
Skellington24 chapter 1 . 10/15/2019 I hope you’re not giving up on this. 94k words is a lot to get through and appreciate, your supportive fans deserve continuation. Pretty please, I’m getting tired of rereading the same chapters haha |
twinklefebz chapter 6 . 6/1/2019 i hope you're not abandonythis story.. |
mollypurkey chapter 6 . 1/7/2019 Oh! It seems that this fic has been abandoned? I would love to see more installments! I love what you’ve written so far, and Sirius, Draco and the twins are hilarious! |
Hannahw0629 chapter 7 . 12/18/2018 Loved it |
mckenziecd chapter 1 . 10/11/2018 Great story so far. I’m glad I found it! Can’t wait for more! |