I am suspicious of Ferus but I admit that I have NEVER liked him so I am biased. It isn’t Sabe because she’s with Padme, but from the sound of things it could be multiple people, and now I’m worried; especially with that cliffhanger.

I know Padme is struggling with hiding and raising her children but I am sure that if she wasn’t there watching them grow and help shape them it would hurt her more and it could leave them bitter that she felt that fighting the Empire and restoring freedom to the galaxy was more important than being there for them and being strangers.

I’m going to call it: Palpatine had absolutely nothing to do with the bomb. He is a Force Sensitive so it’s highly likely that he Sensed the danger and ran to warn them instinctively knowing that there was a bomb but arrived too late and as a result the survivors think that he knew about it. He either just wants the comb as a keepsake or to find out if he got every single person who was responsible for the bomb to avenge his murdered love.

Loved this chapter! Very detailed and interesting:))

Not sure yet who the traitor is or why but I stand by my earlier comment: whoever it is doesn't seem interested in outright outing Padme just Anakin.

There's more to this than meets the eye. I don't think Palpatine had a role in the bombing. He either A: wants the comb to remember his lost love or B: he has wanted answers all these years to who did it and believes that her diary might contain the answer.

And maybe I'm being too generous but it's a possibility that they're looking at his interest/involvement wrong.

Still too many possible traitors but I think it's telling that Padme wasn't identified as the unknown woman traveling with Anakin.

I am skeptical that Palpatine is responsible for the bombing. He seems to truly care for Padme but even I will admit he can and has faked the depth of how much he cares for people.

I like Jar Jar too! :)

I suspect something

Process of elimation is always a good way to figure out a problem in partiuclary a traitor but on occassionaly it can backfire so Dorme and Motee Homever based on what I think I think by Anakin Skipping Sache. All do have some type of Moviation Exercpt for Sache but Dorme and Motee have the highest chance of being a traitor and Sache as a Wild Card Because Anakin Skipped her only you would know the Answer

Your writing it's so so pretty

Great!

Padmé finally knew her aunt’s boyfriend had been the emperor!
Of course I know Palpatine is... Palpatine but I don’t want to believe that he actually killed aunt-Padmé.
Their romance seemed so cute(though it was kind of weird that someone named Padmé fell in love with Papatine.) so her death becomes much more tragedic.

Nice chapter! Keep it going :D

Wow. Your story is just amazing! I just added it into my favorite list. You are a talented storyteller. I hope to read the next chapter as soon as possible. Thanks for sharing it!

I’m glad you’re cured of writers block! I very much enjoy this and I can’t wait for the next chapter! ️

And here is the origin of the name of Luke and Padme's nieces.

This was a very well written first chapter! I will be reading on!

The flashbacks are kinda confusing. Cause i dont really understand who is padmé and luke in the flashbacks. But other than that, great story!