I really enjoyed this story. It was well thought out and written.

Perfect rounded out and great

Come on headmistress why you gotta be so mean. A couple of spelling errors here and there. Hardly worth mentioning. Overall Grade: amazing

This was quite the chapter. I'm looking forward to see how this resolves.

Ok I'm in. A redemption arc of sorts. So far so good.

A great start to what I consider a great fic. Croix and Keith's Relationship is a fun one to read, and their small banter about Croix giving advice to constanze after almost nuking a country is pretty funny. I Don't think I've ever seen someone write what things would be like for Constanze after the missile incident, or how she would feel after seeing technology almost destroying a chunk of the earth. You're Always one to come up with brilliant scenarios, aren't you Supa? And I'm sure you will still surprise me in the future. I wish the show would have given us more on Croix and Cons considering how similar they are in some parts, but good thing we've got fanfictions. Great job, you're awesome.

I loved it! Great job!

Another amazing fic! Croix interactions with all the girls were hilarious, though I was worried about her meeting Akko, since what she did to her was no small thing. But it makes sense that Akko would forgive her just like that. That's just who she is.
So, thanks for writing, I will definitely check out your other stories. You are a good writer.

Told you I was going to read it.

I must say that this is probably one of your best works, the way you described her personality, her issues, mental state, her interactions with the girls and especially with Chariot, it's really something you should fell proud of. On the other hand, poor Keith didn't recived the recognition he deserved, by the girls I mean, but I hope he's okay with that.

It didn't seems to me like an ambigous ending, I felt it pretty satisfying. Of course if it were to be a continuation in the same universe I wouldn't ve opposed, just saying.

Keep writting in the awesome way you always do.

Best regards!

Overall, this story was pretty great! It has a pleasant mix of emotional baggage that causes drama with comedy and realistic comments. Even Akko's serious break down of what happened was in character. I also felt that it was a good representation of Croix as well. When all was said and done, the only times I felt like she was a bad teacher was when she was doing her "evil plan." Otherwise I'd say she was pretty great.

The way each girl from the event was handled was really nice. Jasminka was a pleasant surprise too since, out of all of them, she has the least amount of fleshing out, excluding her whole "I like food" thing. All of Croix's comments towards them were also well thought out; the only one I felt was weird was the sudden admission of "wanting redemption" to Diana. And I don't mean that in a negative way. It just felt a bit sudden, but, given her situation, I think that was totally justifiable.

Diana was also very amusing to watch with her constant refusal of her attraction to Akko and the flustered attitude she would get if it was questioned. And while I'm sure they were going to fix up the relationship later, I have to admit it would have been nice to have a small bonus scene of Diana officially saying they were dating, even if it was to Akko, but your way was fine too.

The comedy part of this story with the way Croix was constantly taken flat footed was well written too. Keith's interactions of being a stern watch dog and a constant gag were pretty well timed as well. His mixture of sarcasm and simple "I'm still here" moments were all great; though I think his light teasing of Diana amused me the most.

But anyways! Thanks for the great story. I'm the type that likes longer ones after such a great set up, but I understand what you were going for here and I know have to accept it, even if I do want more. Oh, but I have to say I'm lookin' forward to more from you anyways if there isn't already something else out there.

Happy writing!

~Yasha-HebiHime

Keith is a good wizard-dad-wingman. I liked him.
I totally wanna see a sequel where Croix gets out of Magic Prison and does fluffy cuddly things 24/7 with Chariot.

Another tearful chapter, but so happy for them! Wonderful, lovely story. And that Diakko moment was just flipping awesome.

UGH, NOW WHAT AM I GOING TO READ

Ugh, that was wonderful! Can't wait to read the final chapter. Need to dry my eyes after this one though!

That was a very interesting story about Croix' start on her path to redemption. Funny at some times, thoughtful at others. I definitely enjoyed her weeklong journey and her interactions with the girls, Chariot and even Keith :D
So thank you for writing this. :)

I really loved this story. I love the fact that Croix evolved from the time she spent with the girls and the fact that they helped each other. I know that you've ended the story but I'd very much like to request one about Chariot and Croix... maybe one when Croix is released? Do keep writing