This is an awesome story! I liked the way it was written. And also, Les is awesome.

Aww, this is so sweet.

i feel like that sometimes... good job with les. he's also an underdeveloped character. its buggs me

Bravo! Loved it immensely! Please write another story. Luv Yas!

-SaTaN-

-gasp-

You implied Snitey, and I love you for that. In fact, I'm gonna recommend this to my cousin, because she has a thing for Snitey too.

I love it. It's very well written. It's short, so it's not a chore to read, and Les is adorable in every fic.

Fabulous job.

Les IS such a cute little thing,I just want to cuddle him so much! _ Davey and Jack can screw each other for all I care,Les is DA BOMB!

I heart Jack/David stories.

This is a Jack/David story.

Therefore, I heart this story.

Plus, Les is a cutey. :)

"But when I see David staring at Jack, with this look in his eyes that's just like the look Mama gives to Papa when she smiles at him across the dinner table" . . . Aww!-worthy

Good luck with your writer's block and thanks for the story. Helped make my birthday.

::freaks out:: I love it I love it I love it! Finally a really awesome Les fic! Its awesome!

Awesome job!

-Tiger

Very nice. I'm so glad there is more Jack/David popping up. Great story, keep up the good work.

wow. wow. wow.

thats all i can say right now.

wow.

this was great. wow. im sorry, it was just so good. if you can do better than this, excuse me, can i come over and kill u? just kidding.

i LOVE jack/david fics. i dont know why, i just do. they seem so cute and perfect for each other. but jack's still MY baby!

yeah, anyway. keep up the good work!

i also love les, too. even though he kinda looks like a mouse. he so CUYOOt!

love, sparker