Your fic is very good. I love the premise and your take on it! And the way you wrote this. Can I suggest you also post on Ao3? That site has a more active fandom and this will definitely be wonderfully received there too!

Wow great fic. :) I loved the last chapter and I can’t wait for the next update!

Oml the date was so fluffy holy crap. I need more so much more

XD Oh my gosh! Their date was so cute! Perfect!

*x* Gosh! This fic is great! Where did you hide it all this time? Well, I’m glad you decided to share this with us. Thank you very much and I’m excited to read more XD

You know what would be really nice? If Izaya denies being soulmates but as he's insecure and doesn't trust Shizuo. Then Shizuo has to win Izaya's heart and prove the power of fate. Bonus if both change for the better as a result

goddamn this is good! can't wait for the drama~

Damn y isn't this more popular? I absolutely love the story

Wahhh! this is so beautiful!

Everyone, especially Izaya, should know by now that Shizuo can tell when your lying. He may not know the reason why or how he knows, but he knows. Love how the story is going, I will keep a look out for the next update.

love! this is beautiful! I love soulmate stories. angst then flufg

Why are they losing their ability to see color? Is it the distance or something that's in their mind? I'm really curious. And I hope the only reason why Izaya loses his ability to see color is because he's meant to meet and fall in love with someone else. I'm glad you're able to write this fanfic! I really like it so far. Can't wait 'til the next chapter!