| Reviews for Accepting a Mortal Truth |
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Guest chapter 22 . 8/7 Please make another chapter |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17 Oh... I'm dumb his dad is Perses, Titan of Destruction. |
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 3 . 7/4 I see you invented Theseus Wright to basically replace canon Percy as the son of Poseidon... This makes no sense to me. Why bother turning Percy into an OC and creating an OC to turn into Percy? Why not just create an OC son of Iapetus and follow his story inserted into Riordan's canon where Percy still exists as Poseidon's son to avoid this whole mix-up? Percy's not even Percy, and it sounds like Percy's now Theseus, so why bother with this changed Percy when he's a complete OC? I really don't get it. You should honestly have just made an OC instead of this scramble. |
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 2 . 7/4 I'm confused about Percy going to the Roman camp. His father, Iapetus, is Greek. Also, Percy's named after a famous Greek hero... why is he going to Camp Jupiter exactly? Not too crazy about Iapetus being Percy's father. It's unique, but I feel like he would be way less powerful than the son of Poseidon. I'm also not sure about Percy not being the Child of the Prophecy and who would be replacing him. I can't really think of why a son of Iapetus would be important in any way. Also, how did Iapetus get free from Tartarus in order to date Sally? And if Sally didn't have Percy so young, why is he older? I also dislike that he doesn't get attacked by any monsters until he's 17. That's so late to start training, years behind everyone else. He also knew about being half-mortal, so his scent would have been pretty strong. The necklace kinda screwed him years of training to fight monsters, and why doesn't every demigod have a necklace like that if they exist? |
TheAttemptedWriter chapter 19 . 5/2 Had a feeling it'd be Abigail tbh. I approve. |
TheAttemptedWriter chapter 11 . 5/1 I kinda feel like Mithras, though a violent dick, could also be a good bro for Perseus. |
Guest chapter 14 . 4/19 The Oldest/Last Olympian is the weakest? Thats kinda dumb. |
Guest chapter 10 . 4/19 This reminds me of Percy vs Ares in The Lightning Thief. |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/18 Strangling a Nemean Lion? Nice, it doesn't get anymore badass than that. |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/18 I hope he meets with Zoƫ. It would be cool to see how he interacts with his niece(technically). Also, big Star wars fan here. I already noticed a lot of quotes. "I don't like sand. Its course, rough, irritating, and it gets everywhere." There was also Obi-wan's encounter with General Grievous. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2 Update please, you must have spot of FreeTime right now because of the covid19 |
TatsuyaShiva4 chapter 1 . 4/2 What a pathetic boring heritage. |
NightFyl chapter 1 . 1/25 I feel like I subconsciously knew it was Iapetus but I know it's not true |
NightFyl chapter 1 . 1/25 was that a reference |
Earthspirit10 chapter 22 . 11/17/2019 This is amazing! It's unlike anything I've ever read so far! Please continue? This is really good! |