Reviews for Elementary Astronomy
HeroLove123 chapter 1 . 7/3
Brilliant! I would love a second chapter.
Arrowman chapter 1 . 7/2
Priceless!
Kknd2 chapter 1 . 1/11
And this is why you have to pick your evil mentors carefully. Their 'master plan' may well have an obvious flaw that reveals they don't have enough sense to manage a shopping trip.
Rake1810 chapter 1 . 5/19/2019
I think this might’ve been better then what canon turned into at the end
Ordalie Gwynfyd chapter 1 . 4/27/2019
It made me laugh really hard. Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2018
Funny, but the infinite tsuky-thingy is shown to bend around buildings & shit. So it likely bend around the globe, assuming the naruto-verse has one.
Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 2/6/2018
I agree that the plan was idiotic. And I mean Dumbledore-level idiotic.
Burning Moonlight chapter 1 . 1/31/2018
Hahaha
jbc chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
I haven't laughed so hard in forever. Thank you.
bashfulglowfly chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
It's the little things that trip up the villains, isn't it.

Well done. Well thought out!

Bravo!
UmbreonGurl chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
Lmao Tobi is fed up with Madara's shit
ShockingRevelations chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
Wow, now that's a gaping plothole right there. Good job, and Obito shows how little thought Madara really put into that plan. Would be fun to see the other Kages' reaction, alongside Madara's though.