Finally coming back to this story!
The first two chapters really went through a major improvement! (TBH, I forgot what I told you to change so this more blind experience removes some of my Bias) The introduction feels alot smoother and the writing is a major improvement. The set up for the monsters and Dip's resentment is alot better too.

I decided to reveiw this chapter after rereading this and I've gotta say Dipper X MK is adorable and my new OTP.

They are listening

They write codes and riddles

Katie is the writer

I was lost

I won’t be alone

This is...ominous. Welp, time to overthink this and reconsider my life choices.

Oooh, cool! New chappie!

Welcome back my fellow writer! I hope that the bumps in your life sort themselves out soon...

Ah, what a chapter! Just a sweet, wholesome little short. Just what I needed to read today.

Thanks for your determination to do your part in keeping up morale! It’s inspired me to do the same-thank you!

Hope you have a great day! And stay safe!

A large change has happened for the greater good, this is much better than before.

*The satisfaction of a new chapter,
*The joy of someone believing in something similar to what you believe about Chara,
*It fills you, with DETERMINATION

yay chara is on there side!

Well, welcome back to the world of living) I've started to think that you abandoned this fic. Really glad to see that you are back) Keep up the good work!

I see you’re not dead...Excellent...Since you’ll be rewriting the first few chapters and writing the next chapter,I’ll be waiting for your return. Until then, goodbye, until we meet again.

Cool! We'll wait till then!

this chapter reminds me of that video with a kid screaming your actions have consequences. nice chapter!

Hello again Blast! This new chapter is pretty solid and I like the nod to the Genocide Route!
By the way, I've spent the last while decrypting your codes and (going off of the Cipher wheel from A Mountain Above Gravity) I think I see where the story's moving. I don't want to spoil anything and I still don't know for sure, but I'm going to guess we'll see more of a certain yellow triangle.
Well, that's all for my review!
Until next episode, I'm just
-Your Average Nutcase

Wow, nice chapter.
I haven't seen the concept of Frisk taking damage because of the resets before, it makes sense if you think about, it also an opening for the plot to expand and such.
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TBH some plot points felt a bit rushed in, the whole revelation about Frisk's power could of been handled a bit better.

Timeblade:
Frisk would not be their Aunt. It's a complicated family tree, so I'll try to explain it. Papyrus adopted Kris, the Twins' father. Sans shares custody over Frisk with Toriel (since they raised her without being married), therefore making Frisk his daughter. Sans and Papyrus are brothers, therefore making Frisk and Kris cousins. Sans is Kris' Uncle, and Papyrus is Frisk's Uncle. Kris is Dipper and Mabel's dad.

After a google search, I found out that the cousin of your father would be your first cousin, once removed. If Frisk were to have children, those hypothetical children would be Dipper and Mabel's second cousins.

If you couldn't tell, I had to think a lot about how the family tree plays out. Frisk is their first cousin, once removed. Toriel is their great aunt, despite not being married to Sans (yet).

I thought of this when I was reading the chapter. Since Sans the twins’s great uncle (did I spell that right?) and Frisk is Sans’s adopted daughter, doesn’t that make Frisk the twins’s aunt?