Reviews for A Beautiful Deception
M.S.Carol chapter 15 . 8/15/2019
Well this just got really good
Sassyvampmama chapter 65 . 8/14/2019
Thanks for sharing this one with us.
tdetwilightlover chapter 53 . 2/2/2019
Why are you saying how would she reacting to “meeting the brothers” she literally already did... like 10 chapters ago... I don’t understand this is so disorganized ... do you not remember her going there in the first place ... becoming friends with Athena ... or was that just a Dream ?!
tdetwilightlover chapter 19 . 2/1/2019
Seriously why is she so dense
tdetwilightlover chapter 18 . 2/1/2019
What the literally fuck no. Okay no. She hasn’t seen this guy in half a decade and she just magically hands all of her evidence over to him. No I call bullshit.
tdetwilightlover chapter 18 . 2/1/2019
Why the fuck is she not running away, this is literally painful to read
celajwhitney chapter 62 . 1/14/2019
aro should have had her executed, he would have done if it was anyone else. she can't be trusted!
Guest chapter 15 . 11/28/2018
I have chill bumps!
Dreamcreaters chapter 1 . 8/14/2018
A really captivating story. I love it
Hiskia chapter 65 . 7/23/2018
A good story! would love an epilogue to finish it off!
kelmikmag chapter 65 . 6/13/2018
Great writing!
ObsidianDraconis chapter 1 . 5/26/2018
so it would seem the family misses bella more than they realize. perhaps it's jasper could maybe be the one sent to find bella in romania? looks to me as if his decision is making a mess of things. is this an unforseen consequence, them missing bella alone, or something more sinister- like someone getting to his friend or his friend not being his friend. one thing is for sure, how much longer can they last like this. noooooooo they were so close! can't it just be as simple as it just was. lol.
Blistful2006 chapter 38 . 3/7/2018
Oh Goodness Esme I cant stand her anymore. Goodness Alice should have left well enough alone. What she feared ended up happening all because she tried to change it smh. The butterfly effect
VryUnique chapter 60 . 2/23/2018
Jane is an idiot and can't wait to see her punishment after she is thwarted.
VryUnique chapter 59 . 2/23/2018
The wolves wanting to kill Leah's mate was definitely not true to the original story. That was their number one law since to kill an imprint would have killed the wolf. They accepted a vampire hybrid because she was an imprint and tolerated her vampire family.
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