Awww! This has such a wonderful ending! I adored the fighting scenes! You really know how to amp-up tension! :D

Thanks for writing!

Well that whole thing was just fucking awesome. Literally my only complaint would be to add in some kind of line breaks for when you’re transitioning between sense and the like ‘cause it was kinda weird going from one point in time to an almost completely different point. But yeah, other than that, this was absolutely fantastic! Really enjoyed reading it. :)

Awesome work, I loved this! :)