There are a bunch of mistakes in this. Why would Kakashi announce Naruto as being on his team ?

His not even a ninja of konoha so why did it say " use against kakashi during the test" which implied that naruto is a ninja of konoha and a member of team 7 instead of Sai.

Continue and update please he fix Gaara Seal .make he save Karin more.

Kiri is called The Hidden Mist

Great story! Can't wait for the next update!

Great job please continue

i cant wait to see the next chapter

Nice

I'm confused about it stating that Naruto came alone but then refers to him as if he had a team at some points and it mentioned Sasuke and his blonde haired teammate but none of them have blonde hair.

Kakashi listed Naruto Uzumaki as one of his genin? Who were the genin that Zabuza mentioned?

Why d didn't Naruto keep the Uzumaki part of his name? It would have helped him more to get allies for Uzushio if he was known as an Uzumaki wouldn't it?

When it kept mentioning the word Mod about the group of people who attacked Naruto was it supposed to read mob? This is interesting but I am a bit confused, too many OC 's tend to throw me off and they were introduced so vaguely that I will have a hard time remembering who they are. Why would so many talented ninja be willing to join a child?

that was good keep the chapters coming

There are many mistakes but those can be corrected. Grammar and usage along with some spelling are all present. There is some problems with the story itself but mainly in progression. Overall I would say review and edit or rewrite. If your knowledge of words and/or usage is lacking then learn more.

CONTINUE PLEASE