Reviews for The Gentleman
treavellergirl chapter 1 . 10/26/2017
For a first meeting, things really took a turn for the weird - or unexpected, in both their cases.
treavellergirl chapter 2 . 10/26/2017
Oh. Wow. That took an unexpected turn. I am so glad I found this story. It sound like it will be massively entertaining, and interesting.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/27/2017
Interesting reversal. I wonder how Luffy will differ in being raise by Sabo rather than Ace. Also what would Sabo and Garp relation be like. I wonder why Ace left early too.
SunflowerIce chapter 2 . 9/6/2017
this is a very interesting idea and I like the beginning so far..
Sabo is not after Whitebeard to kill him, but has another reason to fight against the Whitebeard-Pirates and meets Marco instead.. I really like it! :D
I guess Sabo also does not have Aces devilfruit? And where is Ace then? With Dragon?
Omg, imagining Ace being a revolutionary is kinda weird xD
please continue, I wand to know where this story is going :3
Guest chapter 2 . 8/9/2017
OMFG!YOU CONTINUED IT! YOU ARE AMAZING! THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!
Tray D. Sheila chapter 2 . 8/8/2017
Sabo is still the master of putting on masks ... I know that Luffy might not read the newspaper, but I'm sure Makino and Dogra/Dadan/Magra does. This might be why Sabo is panicking. Poor Luffy can't think he's dead, as the boy have already lost one brother and Luffy shouldn't think he's all alone again.

I'm curious to see if or when Sabo shows his true self. A very promising story here.
Narya Anima chapter 2 . 8/7/2017
Since when Luffy read newspapers?
Wordlet chapter 2 . 8/7/2017
Oooo! Im looking forward to that den den mushi call ;) nice work on this chap, i like Sabo in comparison to ace, it's intetesting to see
tofldh chapter 2 . 8/7/2017
Yes...Sabo's crew was dead...are they really killed by the Whitebeards? Sabo does not seem revengeful towards Marco, so little confused. Anyway, its so Sabo Sabo. He is the master of masks and lies! Cooool! And Luffy, oh sweet Luffy...I hope Sabo manages to send some messages of his living.
Tray D. Sheila chapter 1 . 8/7/2017
Interesting. It can stand alone, but also continue. I would love to see more chapters. One thing I would love to see is Sabo meeting Izo. For some reason, I can't really imagine how that would go and since I can't remember others having done it, I am still hoping one writer (maybe you) would do it.

I'm sure Oyaji will find Sabo just as amusing as he found Ace amusing in canon.
Vongola10 chapter 1 . 8/1/2017
please continue
OnceABlueMoon chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
I love it! Such a great concept!
Angela.Qrow chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
interesting..
mysteryreader6626 chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
Yeeeeeeessssssss.

Where one story ends, a new one starts.

I LOVE YOU!

I wish there is a scene in this where Sabo blames Garp for Ace being then. I am a tad cruel to out loveable old man. XD

Either way, I can't wait to see more! Maybe a Shanks scene plllleeeeeaaaassssseeee.
Wordlet chapter 1 . 7/30/2017
I think that I like ASL with Whitebeards better than just Whitebeards and that although that would be cool I'm sorta into this!
Also, I don't suppose you could PM me about that cursing filter?
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