Been a while since I read this little series! I should get around to re-reading it again, forgot how much of an enjoyable read it was!

The life of Louise in space, it's pretty mundane no matter where you are in the galaxy. It was nonetheless a good read overall. I do look forward to some action again just to spice things up and get things rolling.

I agree. This Louise is too good for that Pirate of a punk, instead an OC would do better.
Please let louise use Pyrokenisess to burn her enemys.

very good I look forward to the next and hope that it does not end up Like stalker zero

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Wow it been like forever. So good to see the continuation. I will state that I am curious as how the story will develop.

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Hey your back. It’s good to see your still writing this wonderful saga.

"C'est quoi ce bordel?" "what is this mess?"

For some reason that line made me laugh so hard my mother had to ask if I was choking and 'needed her to save me'. I don't know why those four words made me laugh like that but thank you, I really needed that today.

Bravo, bravo.

Great Chapter!

Please post next chapter soon

Read through this whole series over the past couple days and you really do have a compelling story here. Really enjoyed seeing the character growth and your relationships therein. Though they could have done with some more coloring in as many of them felt a little hollow and under developed. What ones you did develop and developing nicely.

Your biggest problem that tears this down from quite super high quality fanfiction to average is the numerous and quite embarrassing, consistent, and repeated spelling and gramatical errors. So many of them seem like they could be caught by some minor proofreading whatsoever or even some more basic spell and grammar checks. I'm not sure what program you use to write but even changing to something free as simple as Google Docs or Open Office would dramatically improve this problem.

Other then that I really did enjoy reading this. Thanks a lot for sharing it. I put you on my watch list and hope to see more in the future.

Nice your now starting to show Louise's other skills even if alot are thanks to those runes Louise is providing the creativity keep it up.

Great Chapter!

The 2 fighting ideas uve talked about r interesting. the 1st is using a regular lightsaber with a double bladed one is unorthodox. If you did use it, I think it would be used in very difficult fights bc its equally devastating & dangerous. Also assuming that the DBL's blades can be ignited independently, Louise might use a standard dual wield for situations needing a strong defense/offense or numerous precision strikes. The usage of 3 blades would be devastating bc almost nobody would have any idea to counter much less defend against, but the danger comes from the mechanics of its use. 1 wrong move & uve impaled/dismembered urself. 2nd would be Louise's idea on dual wielding heavy/auto blasters. As you said, it would be terrifying, and it would be quite useful if an area needed to be saturated with fire