um where is the m rated content?
but great story (: (:
is there a sequel to this? (: (: (:

The ending is sooo sadin a happy way

Mace Windu isn't strong enough to defeat Darth Sidious.

So I guess that Balance won't happen since you gave Windu the honor of finishing off the last of the Sith, instead of the Chosen One.

That was a sweet ending I loved it!

Nice ending. Star Wars needs more ending like this.

Thanks for updating!I look forward to your next one!

Thanks for the update

Hmm, I wonder what they will find. I hope we'll see Ahsoka knighted in this story as well. She deserves it.

So, Dooku and Barriss are thinking better thoughts. Hopefully, they can both be saved.

Thanks for the update

Really enjoyed this chapter. Hinort and Kia are so adorable! But it looks like they need to watch out for Lasche. If Anakin and Ahsoka don't do something soon, they're gonna be in trouble. YEEESSS! Rex proposed to Ahsoka! I just love those two so much, good job Rexter! I personally don't mind the length of the chapters. If this is what you're most comfortable with, why change it? And I know what it's like with the whole love thing. I've never been in love or even gone out with anybody, so I know absolutely nothing about it. As long as you write what feels right for you, there's nothing that you need to be concerned about. Excellent chapter, update again soon when you can!

Thanks for updating

Well it seems that everyone is finding happiness. Hopefully, the small amount of jealousy can be fixed. With respect to your chapters, I think you should write them as you can. Hell, this last chapter of mine has been a nightmare, but it is coming together and I suggest you follow your own plan regards Barriss as well.

It's good... really short chapters but good

Loved this chapter, it definitely brought a smile to my face. I really like the direction that your going with the characters, I can't wait to see what happens next. Perhaps Barris is going to be redeemed, it'll be interesting to see what happens if that occurs. I totally feel you with the whole nodding off during class (it's basically me in any class that I don't care about, which is all of them :D). I want to study creative writing when I get to college next year, it's so cool to hear that someone else is doing it! Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter!