love the story.
please write more soon.

Thanks for updating. Sorry about not keeping up with the chapters.

love it.
great update.
wow.
I can't wait what happens next.

Very much a Jazz-centered chapter, but it's understandable that Jazz would have his doubts.

Just keep doing what you're doing, big guy.

Poor Jazz. Prowl gives sound advice, but let's be honest, when it counts Jazz is going to jump helm-first into this mess and adopt Connor. He already loves the kid, and like it or not he can't fight himself.

That being said, what the frag is KTA?

? ... * reads guest review* ... *scoffs* well... it's clear that someone doesn't know how to be PATIENT with the story development before they give their very poor critique.
Don't let it get to you, you're doing a fine job pacing the story and Connor especially. Even I can see that. This story is still awesome! Keep it up. :)

Yep, this had to happen at some point. Unfortunately, this could happen again later on down the road.

Everyone struggling with PTSD has different reactions. I didn't so much have night terrors, but instead panic attacks in my sleep where I'd stop breathing. And trust. Oh boy, that took me a few years to learn to trust anyone, I had so many barriers put up, barriers to help protect what little mind I had left. I love your stories, I find them well written and well researched. Your stories provoke a reaction in me to remember my past, and I always go "yeah, that slag did happen, but it's so much better now"

Yikes, that was intense. I think it's sweet that Jazz cared more about helping Connor and getting him home than the fact that he was holding a human that had wet himself. Kind of reminds me of what animal rescuers go through when they carry baby animals covered in their own waste. Good chapter. Keep it up :)

love it.
great update as always.
wow.
I can't wait what happens next.

This is a good segue into whatever is coming next. Keep it up :)

Whoo... I can't help the sense of relief now that Jazz has figured that out about Conner's parents. Where it goes from here is anyone's guess. Keep going! :D

This story needs some research. Rich kids do get kidnapped, it happens ALL the time, especially in South America. Plus Conner's reactions aren't believable. Perhaps you'd like to research Child Trauma.

Oh boy...

love it.
great update as always.
wow.
I can't wait what happens next.