This is good! I really like this

Lovely upstairs and downstairs conversations. Nicely done!

"The fact that you still feel it means you aren't what you accuse yourself to be"
Wow. That's really a lifesaver of a sentiment. Thank you.

Very good start!

It's at least three fucking years from when you started writing and when I'm reading. 1 you are magnificent in this writing . 2 you is by far the best I've read in over a thousand. 3 your warnings almost get the story of so good. Lol 4 congratulations on your head, your acceptance and the whole fucking. 5 I'm from Brazil and do not speak 3 shits in English, so Sorry

I like your Severus, I am seeing a little sexy under the surly.

omg this was amazing and the sex scenes were bangin!

omg this was amazing and the sex scenes were bangin!

hello there !
well first it's been at least the 3rd times that year that i'm reading this fic and i still find it bloody exceptional.

I love the way you write , and that fucking end (yes fucking is definitly the good word) was really good.

Finally not a fic with too much rainbows and unicorns in it but not too crude either.
i'm definitly a vanilasorry , kinckers , bdsm's definitly not for mebut I find very little thing that was actually shocking in your writing , actually , i didn't find anything shocking sometimes just finding some details a little digusting ,but, it's just because my brain's been formating to think so as a child (like speacking of snort or drool is kind of a turning off for me )

well anyway , I really enjoyed and i'm pretty sure i'll re-read it in the futur , thanks for your hard work !

(p.s , I hope everything is understandable , english's not my native language )

Please update this it's so freaking awesome I can't wait for more

I'm definitely going to hop over to AO3 to read part two-I straddle the BDSM/Vanilla line a lot of time and I was really impressed with how you handled their dynamic and the wild tangle of emotion and consequences of the student/teacher origin! I can definitely see some vanilla folks being confused by the negotiation aspects of their early sexual relationship, but it came off really well. I dont know if you're still on the island, but I hope it is(was?) wonderful, and I cant wait to continue reading their story!

Great story

oh that AN is beautiful. I wish more people would put it like that.

I really enjoyed this, thank you. Love the link, and looking forward to more. I can’t, however, find the story on aao3

reading a review about destroying slytherin rather put me off reading this. I am also a proud Slytherin, purely because I am a loner, I don't make friends with people who use me and don't give anything back. either one gets rid of all the houses or one creates house unity. at the end of book 7 voldemort attempts to destroy the sorting hat and proclaim that Slytherin is the only house. it's somehow a case of pot and kettle for the 'light' to attempt the same.