I just love how you basically rewrote Dishonored into a novel, while adding your own changes as you saw fit. I love how more "realistic" you made the situation and the characters, which includes Corvo himself. I mean for example, it is more realistic that it'll take him a bit longer to figure out his powers.

That being said, I wanted to talk about what I felt was lacking in the story. Speaking of the powers, if I recall correctly, he doesn't really use a lot of the powers, nor does he seem to gain the other ones, aside from Blink and maybe Time Stop.

Then there's The Outsider - or rather, the lackthereof. On one hand, I love the way you wrote him, and how you made him seem a bit more human. On the other hand, I felt like you could've integrated him into the story a bit more, especially by having Corvo collect the runes, and thus, meeting him time to time. The big part of Dishonored includes The Outsider and his Mark, which I felt like you didn't include enough into the story.

Nonetheless, I very much enjoyed reading this fic, and I look forward to you writing Dishonored 2 in your own way!

I have read a few fanfictions made by liquid, and I always enjoy the twists he put in these stories.
Liquid, if you're reading this, keep doing what you do.

Really nicely written. Good novelisation of the game as a whole I suppose. The changes you made were honestly quite enjoyable and you managed to keep it interesting in low chaos so well done to you. Esma and Corvo was honestly a nice touch seeing as it wasn’t too out of the lore and it kept everything else in line.
Overall, a really good story and you should be proud of this!
Good show.

This was a great, albeit short retelling of Dishonored, and im rather fond of the changes. You wrote low chaos without it being 40 hours long and uneventful as frik. Bravo!

I love it when Corvo dons a guard's outfit. It's been hilarious both times.

I wish Piero and Sokolov had done that in-game. It'd have made this mission so much easier.

hmm, very nice.

Wow. The entire Boyle family is rather messed up, isn't it?

Well, I've been enjoying this story so far, including all the changes. Help from the Outsider is nice, but what about how to use the magic?

Esma truly is an odd girl.

*Blinks* Heh, girls and their kinks.

Great stuff, nothing warms me more than seeing a child reunite with her dad.

Pedophile Masochist?! He deserves death!

the right equipment for the job.

reverse tinman~

Liking it very much.