I'm loving this story and I hope you continue it! I honestly would've preferred this to what happend in the canon.

niceeee hoping for moreee kyou

Let me start by saying this: YESSSSSS! Another chapterrrrr!

So, that was the sweetest and most interesting continuation of a story I've read in a while. Sweetest of all time actually.

A bit of criticism! Hope you don't mind. I think Kyou could use a bit more Tsun in the moments where she's teased by Tomoya, and maybe later on she shows a dere side, caused by them getting closer or a sticky situation or something.

I like all thw antics they get into though, eveyone's personality is bouncing off the others well!(for lack of better phrase). And I like how Tomoya is still flawed and this actually affects the story! He scares Ushio, and it all plays out realistically, shaking up the stoey by adding drama and keeping me interested while balancing out calm, funny, and serious monents. (Comic relief was well done at the end too!)

This was more than worth the wait. Thank you for continuing this, and I hope my compliments help keep you motivated for more c: feel free to pm me if you'd like talk about your fic or Clannad some more

Awesome this was so worth the wait!

I'm so glad you brought Botan into the story. I'm curious to see Kyou and Ushio's relationship develop even more.

Also the Sunahara and Tomoya bit at the beginning was funny as well.

Thanks for not forgetting this story and us readers!

Great story so far, really looking forward to the vacation section coming up!

awesome chapter! I'm really happy with the way you wrote the texts and also how you made it easy to tell the texts from the regular dialogue. It was also good to see how your building up Kyou and Tomoya!

Cute Story. TomoyaxKyou is always one of my favorite Clannad pairings.

Any idea when the next chapter is coming out? it's still a good story!

Amazing chapter! I think you got the right character for an older Kyou down. It was great to see Tomoya interact with her, it was really well written!

Glad to see your back can’t wait for more

Awesome I'm so glad you decided to come back to this work! I really love the chemistry you have between Tomoya and Sunahara! I hope that the next chapter is in the works and will come out soon!

Finally! I waited forever for this update, keep it up, this is awesome!

I love the of Kyou and Tomoya more than any other pairing (maybe equal with Tomoyo) I also love the idea of the too getting together after Nagisa’s death. I would suggest in the future being a bit more descriptive of the environment. I do have a request for how I hope the story will go. I’m hoping Ushio will begin to look at Kyou as a Mother figure more than a teacher and push Tomoya and Kyou together. Please keep it up and I look forward to more updates

Awwwww!
This is so amazing!
I'm so glad that Tomoya's gotten himself back together!
And this is so well written too!
I absolutely love it!

This is a good way to start off a new story, you show the characters interactions, let them stay true to themselves as well. Since Ushio is around 5 and Tomoya is trying to reconnect with her, I'd expect Ushio to be more quieter with her Dad since he hasn't been around, like from the anime. However it seems they have a better relationship now, which I enjoy seeing.

When it's a Kyou or Ryou fanfiction, I usually go with Kyou because I feel that they have better chemistry together from viewing things through Clannad and Clannad After Story. When Tomoya does one thing, she reacts in a direct way. If Kyou does something, Tomoya tries to finish it; depending on what it was. I'm curious to see where you will take things next.