| Reviews for Marionette |
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The Elleth Meowen chapter 6 . 4/20 This is amazing. Like, really. You’re writing is very, very, very good and entertaining to read. I hope you haven’t lost interest in this story (although I understand if you ever do; it happens) because I’m invested now. I want to see what happens. Usually, I can pick up the plot threads as they’re being laid out and guess where the story is heading. I’m pretty good at it, too. But I have no idea what’s going to happen with this one. I have some hunches and a few hopes, but nothing nearly as solid as a guess. So I hope you update! Regardless, I hope you have a good day! Happy writing! |
Neko Hoshi Hime Okami chapter 6 . 2/24 Pwease please update soon! I love Veda so much and her sass. |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/5/2019 If this takes place when Erasherhead is a kid then wouldnt All Mights teavher be alive? Hopefully she saves her |
Wicken25 chapter 6 . 11/22/2019 Interesting this will take place in the teachers child hood? |
Nameless Angel 00 chapter 6 . 11/22/2019 I feel like I would have a similar reaction to her dad as Veda. |
Guest chapter 6 . 11/17/2019 I’m loving this soooo much! I can’t wait to see how she develops and find out what exactly happened with rose and more about her quirk. Ohhhhh or how she interacts with cannon characters! Is Brandon you to become a big fixture in her life and this story? I’m intrigued. Anyways, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this so much. And this chapter was AMAZING! And I laughed so hard throughout this chapter lmao. And now I’m trying to predict more about Hisoka. Which by the way that name reminds me of Hisoka from Hunter x Hunter lmao I was picturing him while readin the first few chapter and literally died out laughing. |
DodemGM chapter 6 . 11/11/2019 Great stuff! Just found this story and I love the slow build you've made so far. I love SI/Reincarnated fics and usually the beginning is either hit or miss, and yours is a magnificent hit. Love the family dinamic, well balanced, from goofy and fluffly moments to the heart wrentching and dramatic situations they go through. I like the implication this chapter has with Quirk discrimination, so not only are quirkless people alienated, also people with mutation type quirks (can't say I completely blame them, I'll be downright terrified of something not resembling a complete human. Like Vedaor is it Lillat the start.) I can only hope the best for them, specially Rose. Now that they're going to Japan, is she going to be isolated? Not knowing people there, or the manic obssession with heroes, or whatever else. She's gone through enough so far. Also Veda/Lill, love her behaviour so far, remains me of myself when I was young, not dealing with crap from other children. Hisoka for the other part is such a multi facet character that makes him have some good highs and some bad lows for me, but this unexplored past is interesting, my guess so far is some childhood bullying, but that's not all, is it?Take all the time you want to write this, pressure isn't good. Anyways, I can't think of anything else to say right now. Keep it up! |
akagami hime chan chapter 6 . 11/10/2019 she thought she wouldn't need to learn a second language? BAM YOU'RE LEARNING JAPANESE NOW, YOU FOOL hahahahah poor girl. I mean, we all knew she'd have to learn at some point but they just dropped it out of nowhere lol |
Vivi Neferatari chapter 6 . 11/10/2019 Thank you for the chapter |
ichbinnureinnutzer chapter 5 . 11/10/2019 "one day"...Well that's encouraging. Just kidding, this is an awesome chapter! I especially like the parts where Hisoka is annoying. Also you don't have to apologize for taking time to write great content. Don't stress yourself out. |
LiLy Resh chapter 6 . 11/10/2019 oh dear. hisoka having a dark side would be interesting. he seems so happy and cheerful most of the time so seeing the dark side would be cool! also, i'm really looking forward to veda's adventure in school ! |
TrilbyBard chapter 6 . 11/10/2019 Elementary school children are like puppies. If you leave them to 'group play,' something's gonna ripped up. |
Delaedyn chapter 5 . 11/5/2019 Welp...I’m hooked! Take whatever time you need. As someone who took 3 yrs to finish a fanfic, don’t worry about how long it takes... those who love your story will keep coming back to read it! Your story is beautifully written and I’m dying to see how it all unfolds! |
Vivi Neferatari chapter 5 . 11/5/2019 Is she an empath or something? |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/4/2019 ! 3 |