I love you so much
And that hurt, a lot
The ending did too
Everything did
I hurt
But that’s impressive and I loved it so thanks for writing!

awesome!

Sorry, but...

I CAN'T

"LUFFY LOVES MEAT"

THE ETERNAL TRUTH

And another frickin masterpiece! Damn you and your brilliant shorts! I read this through thinking it was funny and then I read it again and found it heartbreaking.

This was a wonderful read

Poor Ace... that's tough!
but everyone was being Great around him. Supportive and Helpful.

Lying Spell is really Good Plot and Surpringly Rare to find!
Awesome!
i'm Loving it!

Really sweety ! Thatch pretty good, I don't find out that Ace was lying just by the reply he gave him ! I thought that maybe he was missing his brothers or feeling ashamed to keep his secret away of his family now that he found a bunch of loved ones.
I really liked it, you did a great joob, congratulations ! And thank you !

I was a bit iffy about the story at first, but it turned out reaaly great. I Love whitebeards crew and their interactions. Also loved how you this story up. never realized anything until thatch did

If you feel up to it, I would love a sequel to this because this fic was so amazing and then left me at a cliffhanger. I want to know the talk they had! And what Ace revealed *wiggles eyebrows*, loved the fic! :)

that was beautiful but I wish someone had thought to ask that if it was a lying spell how he managed to say his name was Portgas. just because I'd love to see Aces response, awesome story though

That was excellent. I love the idea of truth spell, it worked well. I really liked what you've done with the Whitebeards and Izo specially. Seeing Ace lying was a bit heartbreaking though. Anyway that was great. Thanks for sharing!

What an excellent story! The characterization is spot on and absolutely lovely. Ace and his bonds with the rest of the Whitebeards are some of my favorite topics too! This idea is wonderful and the skill put into Ace's dialog is astonishing.

As soon as I finished the story I had to read it again. Everything Ace said made sense whether it was taken as truth or "run through a negation filter". I didn't even realize anything was odd until he said his family loved him more than he loved them.

Oh jeez this was great! Poor Ace getting cursed and then lying oh no :'( brilliant fic, dear!

Aww ace i feel for you. I totally did not notice that it was not a true spell. Everytime that wad a red flag i just was like well ace got over that is this story. But in the end it makes all sence even his name and how he misses his brother. Loved it it is an awesome story

The star wars references were brilliant. Good work. I would love to see a bit more were Ace talks about himself but the ending was good and I really liked it. Great work!