can't wait for the next chapter

1st chapter stated twins to be 3 years younger than Naruto, 2nd chapter states Naruto is 21 so that would make the twins 18 and they are still Genin after being trained from birth? Calling them rookies? This timeline along with the fight sequences make no sense.

The 1st bounty fight was unreal as in not believable. He stabbed the guys stomach a bunch only for there to be no adverse Effects? The hits him with a wind juts that knocks him through 3 count them 3 trees. That is tremendous force! Then he is stated to have all these broken bones and things dislocated. The then is stabbed mult times in the chest and is still on his feet readying another jutsu? That is ridiculously over the top.

Dang this is really good can’t wait for more hopefully.

Has this been abandoned or something? Because it sure looks that way. After all it's been almost a year since it was last updated.

All this is super good but why cant you do it like this. A sane military general, who later went on to become the president of either us or japan, transmigrate into this naruto? Your story is compelling but pure destructive. He has ideals,wisdom still attached to money to hide pain? The only reason that this story is good because he is still decisive.

Update pls

Am i the only one who imagines naruto smoking a joint at all times?

Shouldn't have clone 3 and 4 switch attacks? To make 2 very powerful attacks?

I'm already hating ur description of naruto...no offense bruh ur not doing him any favours if u think it looks cool what's up wit u using 'as' in every sentence...?

English ain't ur 1st language ryt? or ur second or third or fourth or fifth...lol.

I'm kidding but stop wit the 'as' it's annoying and the putting everything into detail is annoying to.

nd down playing alot of reactions especially how u down played Itachi and shisui's reaction over the rinnegan.

but it's ur story ... do wat u have to do but maybe getting a beta would do u well

No lo negaré esta teoría es asombrosa y esperare el siguiente capítulo

Hey! Let me just put this out there. It’s a great story, and I really enjoy the premise. However, you really need to find someone to proof read it for you. I say this because I want you to continue writing stories and improve, but your grammar is atrocious at times. You have a tendency to use specific words unnecessarily and repeatedly. In general, when you reread your sentences, if you feel like it doesn’t change or develop anything, then you should delete it. I have these issues myself and people do help me out in life, so this is just my attempt at a friendly note

Feel kinda sorry for Yagura since he was being controlled

une suite

Naruto & Kushina becomes brother & Sister relationship instead an mother & Son relationship.