This is a really good story! I can't wait to read where it leads and see if star will fall down a deeeeeep psycho path for Marco or if she does a 180. Either way, I really am enjoying it and can't wait for more updates!

Great chapter. But I think Star will be doing something wrong if she uses a dark spell to get of rid of Jackie, and if she does that and Marco finds out he won't forgive her.

I really liked it! The slow build up to star being more apathetic to Jackie and wanting to keep Marco entirely to herself is great to see. The only thing I notice is the (inner) dialogue just seems a bit off in regards to how the characters speak. Other than that, I love the story and hope it doesn't go on hiatus!

Things are picking up here, really interested in what’s going to go down and what Star plans on doing.

Awesome chapter. I hope Star doesn't do anything she would regret.

Well than xD
Seeing as I only just found this story I can't comment on the 3 year break but it's always nice to see a story (especially interesting concepts like this) return from the depths of hell :D
At least the break explains why we have ourselves some evil Eclipsa... you hardly find these types of stories nowadays seeing as she was established a good person. Really looking forward to more of this.

This is really interesting, a clear divergence from canon but a compelling one that I’m pretty interested in. It’s like you took the direction a bunch of people expected when we got our first look at Eclipsa and made it into a fic. Eager to see where this goes, looking forward to more.

Great chapter

When will you update new chapters? It's been long

When will you update new chapters?

Well this time, I actually like Jarco but just for this moment. I like the story though. Can't wait what Eclipsa planning to do with Star

Dammit Marco, learn how to be sensitive. Did he really expect for Star's crush to just vanish or something. I do like that Star didn't immediately hate Jackie - since she's a person that's difficult to hate - only after the display of affection did the hate really kick in.

Nice slice of life/angst episode with a nice introduction of Eclipsa. She's got an 'evil' ambition with a pleasant&funny personality, and SNOOKERS!

You know, I don't think Star will give her wand just like that. To save Marco, yes, but for a selfish reason, I expect a lot of resistance. Maybe Star can make a better deal with Eclipsa, to agree to help the condition of Monster kind in exchange for Marco's heart.

Enjoying this so far! Excited to see where you go with Eclipsa in this story, and also enjoying the whole Star-Marco-Jackie plot. Will be interesting to see how the two stories connect. Good work! :)

I still agree with your stance; it would be lazy fan writing to just push Jarco conveniently aside. That said, it keeps getting easier to sympjatize with Star.

And I find it interesting that you are setting up Eclipsa as a villain who clearly doesn't see herself as a villain. Her intentions are noble, and she'e even friendly to her minions.

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