pleas keep going where all stuck inside so it the perfect time

You know instead of Flash why not Oscar. Why Oscar well If you bring some svtfoe character in this story then why not Oscar Star original crush.
Seriously I don't really feel comfortable knowing Star have a crush on a Bully, I mean seriously saying Star want to date with Flash are just like saying Star want to date with the Echo creek high school bully which I totally forgot his name is.
Seriously man.

I like the way you portray star’s relationship with Jackie and janna the biggest gripe I had with the original show was a superficial all of star relationship were. She never really cared for any one but Marco and even then that was a unhealthy possessive relationship. We’re Marco was just her inability. The first thing she dose was somon a monster that kills random kid witch he barely even reacks to. He never gets mad at her for try to kill Jackie we they were to gether. Or for breaking them up even thaw they had a happy healthy relationship. Then turns around and dumps him right after only for him to stay and keep pamper her. Then when he starts dating her friend Kelly she dumps Tom and then breaks them up. Ow and then she destroys all magic killing who mows how many people including some of are favorite characters and skrewing the pony heads(need magic to move). If any one cares. Then let’s moon and Mina the to people that caused this and kill many many people walk. And even then Marcos willing to stuy in an eternal void of darkness just to be with her it was pathetic. And Marco honestly was kinda a karp character. I mean despite the how star killed a random kid infunt of him and he did nothing. He’s a total marry sue. From the first time we meat him he’s already perfect. He’s smart he can fight monsters he’s popular the ownly really problem he had was he c

please make more chapters

I'm a little confused with Peter Parker's attitude towards Jackie when it came to MJ and all the other girls he wasn't hard to speak to

Question will Peter cross dress like how Marco did?

Please don’t tell me you have decided to stop writing this story. Too many authors has left their fanfictions on hiatus or unfinished.

cool

Ah, good old food jokes.

Thanks for updating. :)

It was great to see Dr. Octavius and for Peter to be a fan of his work, but Star and the other students were a bit bored of the presentation. Luckily, Peter and some of the students were interested in Octavius' Green Energy project. It's interesting that Star didn't quite like the idea of Octavius using magic for scientific purposes. It was surprising that Jameson showed up to get Peter and seemed to be interested in Star for a story about her the newspaper. Too bad for him that an explosion occurred, and that meant for Peter and Star to investigate it as heroes. Spider-Man and Farfalla have a rough time against Green Goblin, and it's terrible that the villain got away. I think it's great that Peter convinced Star to work at the Daily Bugle so the money they make can help his Aunt May. Dr. Octavius finding a strange substance at the fight scene to help the world is great, but too bad that Green Goblin is striking some deal with him in exchange for the magic.

great and interesting story

Oh this is gonna be fun.

This is going great! Is this an early appearance of Toffee? I can't wait until you introduce Venom!

Is that Toffee talking to the soon to become Doctor Octopus? Awesome!

I can't wait for when my favorite Spider-Man villain, Venom, appears!