this is just a guess

his mother, sei, old girlfriend?

i like this fanfic, and the way you added characters and blended bits of the original storyline is a nice touch. it really works in this story. please write more! and email me if you could

Wow, this is an amazing story, I'm surprized you havn't gotten more reviews. Maybe because it's so deceptive... my guess of the narration might be Masao, because of the way that he talks to Rei. That, or if it's more obvious, Sei.

I like the sound of this one. It's angst, so I'm bound to like it. Please continue at least a little more so that I can get the jist of this story.

I love it! Its beautiful. I dont think it has too many descriptions at all, theyre very good descriptions.

"She had drawn Rei as other see him...but in the background, out of sight of his eyes, she drew me...drew us together." I loved this phrase.

This is a very smart and well-written story thats a nice length. And I love the way it ends, leaving so much to the imagination. Good job.

Oh wow, that was beautiful. Very descriptive, wonderful job!

Dude it was well oakay more talk less detail. THat is only my oppinion however, so don't get all emotional if you don't like what i have to say. Oh ya umm i get how its like mars and all but u should continuie it as your own story not just a fan fic.

-Lea * *

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This was really good. I hope you continue. I do admit that I am a little confused (maybe I'm just ignorant), but confused is gives a sense of mystery.I like mystery. Anyways, like I said please please continue.

I really like this one, keep it up!