Bet when certian people learn afew surprises it will be funny

I wish you would have continued this story sounds like it was a good idea

Can't wait for the next chapter and more please update soon love this story

this isn't very good. I hate unnecessary oc's, and naruto's team of all oc's with utterly forgettable names sucks, as do the oc loser on sakura's team.

Also, you said no uchiha massacre in chapter 1, then forgot that in chapter 2 when sasuke says he'll hunt down a certain someone and restore his clan.

Good start.

Interested to see where this goes and how people will react to Sakura's change.

Also wondering if Minato and Kushina will try and reconnect with Naruto only for him to blow them off, due to years of neglect.

Update the story

Great story and I can’t wait for the update. Thanks for posting.

Really good hope you update soon

I could've done without all the damned OC's. A whole team of them for Naruto and another for team 7, rather than just putting Naruto or Sai on team 7.

I pretty much hate OC's, so I won't much care about these OC's, hope you'll just skip most of the lead up to the exams.

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

Okay i like this fic and I hope you continue it but you need to explain why his parents neglect him because Kushina knows what it’s like being a Jinchūriki and making Minato is a seal master so none of them will hate him or neglect him because of the Kyūbi because they know better.

Also do not give Naruto any ocular abilities as someone can be strong without them plus destroy the eyes remove the advantage so without their eyes they aren’t that great, plus it is overdone

you gotta slow your roll and not be so fast paced I had a few moments where I was trying to figure out what even happened or where a person came from.

awesome. ive waited for so long for this to update. cant wait. a few grammar errors here and there...mostly was/were, advice/advise and such like that. but other then that, an amazing chapter. cant wait for more

Lol. Keep it up!

Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. Will Naruto get some more girls to help rebuild the clan or will it just fall to Sakura for that lol Sakura isn't happy about her team, Ino probably wants out of hers as well lol.