greath story must have more :)
pleas continue with this!

I hope you come back to this

And here I was, coming to reread this story and Dreadnought of the Omnissiah. When I see that it says 17 chapters when I clearly remember reading only 16. How xould I have been so bilnd. Maybe i forced myself to not see and forget and wanted myself to read a continuation of this masterpiece. I even tougt it read that it was updated but the year is wrong of the humanity.

Love the stories and a big fan.
Would love to see how each of the major non-chaos factions get there own piece of heaven. Except the Tau. Fk those blue pu$&y faced lieing Bastards.
Have a wonderful day to everyone out there!

This is great, please continue!

so cool story with a unique idea...however the most likable thing about this story (you being upfront) is sliding greatly with each new chapter. You getting more and more vague trying to "surprise" your readers...im not sure why amateur authors think after reading about a main characters for so long that we (readers) NOW want mystery and plans left out to be dropped on us...i get thats it leaves shitty authors rooms to be "creative"...or what it truly means..they got bored and now want to be "exciting"...or as iv now seen over 100000 thousand times...start ruining there story by "changing" there writing style...i get it... your bored...how about you just stop writing this story and start a new one...or you could just keep trashing this until the good readers...i.e. people smart enough to read REAL books.. get so fed up with you they move on...and every time we see you start a new story..no matter how good it could be...we skip it..because your HAD a good story..and fucked it up for no god damn reason beyond you could..so why try another story of yours..you'll just do it again.

I love the end of your summary:
“...rebuild in peace. Rated T for violence.”
Lol!

Thanks for writing. Really enjoyed binge reading your story. Keep up the great work

Does anyone else imagine Cirrikan as being voiced by Matt Smith, maybe it’s because the fact I watched that one episode of clone wars before I first started reading.

Noice

I am so loving this, I hope you continue soon.

Very nice please make more

Thank you for the chapter :D

Awww yeah. Cirrikan is taking over. Keep up the updates. I enjoy this story.

Good stuff

Oooh, damn. The Technomancer is a force not to be triffled with. Also are those pariahs who took them?