Cute story

First time I’ve ever wanted to write a fan fiction.. based on someone else’s fan fiction. This was fantastic! Wished we read a bit more how the relationship goes on as Lucy adjust to regular life and natsu to having someone special besides Happy around. Still a great read!

Great chapter.

Interesting story.

The only thing that could have been better was if when they left Jude’s study after the argument Lucy said he never said I couldn’t sleep in your room

Oh my gosh, I think you have spoiled me when it comes to dragonNatsu/Lucy stories! Seriously this was perfect from the pace to the right amount of humor, etc that you could still tell that these were FT characters and not just people who shared their names, like I could hear them speaking their parts.

Loved the hex frogs, I died of laughter so many times in that chapter! My only complaint is that the story ended XD well done!

Thank god, for a moment I thought it was gonna be one of those stories where she falls in love with him even though he’s an ass. Thank god he’s not as much of an ass... now.

The nalu “mutual lusting” (lol) is just subtle and cute and just right ugh i love the way you write!

I loved how this story went from him holding her as an object to loving her I absolutely loved this story!

Excellent story! I loved it all!

I loved this story! Good job!

Absolutely loved this fic 3 thank you for writing it and sharing it with us.
Just a question though, you referred in your author notes to another fanfic titled “an incubus’ bite” and I got really intrigued by it but couldn’t find it. Did you actually publish it? Or maybe I didn’t know where to look for it ;P

This was... beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

I loved the story! You did a great job and I just love it, when Natsu is possessive over Lucy. It's too awesome!

What a beautiful story!