love love love this story! reread it at least 3 times and will be back!

What a lovelly story! I wish hyde had never been to vegas and this alternatative reality fits just perfect! JH forever!

*LOVE*

Very nice. Gotta love this one! Extremely sexy and well written. I like your style of writing.

Oh. Absolutely *yum*.

I'm new to That 70s Show fanfic, but not to fanfic in general - I've been reading for years - so while this is one of the only T70ss fics I've read, I can unhesitatingly put it on my list of fanfic faves.

Your Hyde is just perfect. He's just the right kind of Zen, and his POV is great - dry but honest, very very Hyde. And all of the other characters are spot-on too: I can almost *hear* them speaking. It's great, great, great.

~ Kendra A

P.S. I realize you just updated it, but I'm also looking forward to more of "Unrequited." Because that, too, made me happy. )

Okay, let me just start off my saying that you have one of the best "Hyde" voices I've read. It's just the perfect balance of conspiracies, hardness, "man's", and then that little softie that shows through every now and again. For some reason, I've lost a little of my Hyde love of late, and this did wonders to bring it back.

I really liked this chapter because it shows how much growth Hyde has gone through in the story without actually changing him unbelievably. His answer at the beginning is to run away and leave everything behind, but in the end, and he even says it himself, he's starting to finally get love. He's not going to leave again.

And, a problem that I've always had with couples like J/H as compared to E/D is that you don't always know what drives them. What keeps two people as different in love like they are? I really enjoyed Hyde's explaination of why it was that he loved Jackie and how they fit. It meshed so perfectly with their characters.

Ah, this is definitely one of my fav J/H pieces.

Now, I've heard rumors that you may have a smut piece in the works. I don't want to nag or anything, but it is kind of one of my talents in life. Will we be seeing that soon?

That's it?

It ended so uninterestingly! I did like the story though and that part with Donna wanting to pop the zit and Jackie telling her to keep her "lumberjack" hands away showed how didicated you remained to the true character. I know Jackie always says that but it was so loosely thrown I remembered it.

I like how you got Hyde to cover the whole Donna vs. Jackie deal because it had me actually realise how true his thoughts were. I never saw when he did date Donna and

This is one of the good J/H fics.I like 's a good on writing this story.

Aw, really great story. Really honed in on Hyde's essence. I hope they do end up together, and kudos for the Kitty/Red reference, aren't they similar? :)

I loved this story! Great ending, a little sad to see it go but, oh well! :)

aww its over! i really liked this story. it turned out good! great job!

Ok, this is the first time i've read these. So i sat down, i read the first one, then the second one, then the next one... and i have just finished the last chapter. And let me tell you, if you wrote another chapter and put it up tomorrow, it wouldn't be soon enough. I loved them all, i think they are great. You've got the essense of the characters perfected in every way. They are really, really good. I am now eagerly waiting more...please do more... Good Job! Keep up the work and if you write another, i'll can't wait to read it! :D

A great ending to a great story!

I really enjoyed it. Hope to see more of your work!

Great chapter! It was a great ending to a great fic! I loved it! Can't wait 'till your next fic.

Great story! I like the positive ending. Hyde and Jackie deserve happiness.

Carol