Please update...im a natza fan and ur stories r awsome...please update this story wheneva..its really great

If I had a sister Acnologia probably killed her along with me, my parents, Igneel, basically everyone I ever cared about. At least I have Zeref my brother.

All because of Loke, damn him! And I'm not Lucy's boyfriend.

I don't care about Lucy. But I will kill anyone who hurts someone that I do care about so people should be afraid of me. That and hell yeah I'm nice so long as you don't piss me off.

Keep up the awesome work! You're amazing!

Great chapter! And i was wondering, do you have a set chapter to end at? Or will you keep things rolling until you reach a stop?

Amazing chapter, Natsu and Erza are bonding and becoming closer. Though I wonder how it would pan out when they get together and Lucy reaction. And yes, I'll watch it when I have time :)

Noooo, not another cliffhanger! I NEED MOREEE THIS IS EPIC

something's not right here... weren't there more chapters? Didn't Natsu come over Lucy's house while Erza was there? Yet after rereading, it's all gone? Wat happened

I read the first version of this and it was amazing. however, I must say I'm liking this one even more. Keep it up!

awesome story! there is a feel to this where it seems more, fluid. if that makes sense. please update. bye bye

Amazing~ _ though I haven't seen Dragon Cry, so I have no idea what it is. It seems Natsu true persona has shown forth, though I wonder how it will be from here on out.

Men don't giggle!

Pink suits red more than blue... Cheeky one.

Wohoo. Awesome story