Um, hello, Author Person? Yes, *cough* hello. This story is very moving and tear jerking and I really need you to finish it please. Please? Pretty pretty please with sugar on top and a cherry too? Please?

Cash is begging. Please! Peace!

Your story is amazing. It filled holes in the Homecoming narrative that I didn't realise were bothering me. Thank you! (I really hope you post the last chap as well, and it has either Tony or May finding out about the real events of Homecoming).

Update, k wannit. NOW, THIS IS SO GOOD

"just one more chapterone year laterregardless, very well written. lightly touched a sort of stream of consciousness in ch1. did very well with making it feel more personal with the reader, enough detail to feel closer to Peter's struggles, but not too much so as to make it a wall thrown at the reader. very nice job portraying the characters. hard to do, but you did it well. all in all, good job imo.
wish I could see how it ends, missing the resolution with mj and Tony, and well, everyone really. but oh well I guess.

Please update this story

Really enjoyed this story so far. Can't wait to see how you continue it.

hey, when are you gonna update this?

I was rewatching this movie today and found myself waiting for scenes that actually come from this story. I have to tell you that you really know how to get in someone's head. It's amazing. I love this story!

This is amazingly written

I loved just everything about your story! I wanted a fanfic that could show Peter's feelings and thoughts about being a superhero and a kid, and the loneliness he should have felt cause he just couldn't tell anyone about his problems, not even Ned. This is a great fic. Thank you so much for this work! I'll be waiting for the next chapter

next chapter needed so much！

Oh, oh, oh, this is so awesome!
Wow! I need more.
Peter is really young when you think about it, he is only fifteen. Most fifteen year olds don't find themselves in life and death situations every other month, but he does. That means that he is allowed to have moments to cry and to panic and to be a scared kid because his is one.
In spite of being a kid, he cannot stop being spiderman. It is who he is. I am his age, and I know that if I had started being spideman (woman in my case) I wouldn't be able to stop. I would see all the death and tragedy on the news and think to myself that I could have stopped that if I had been out there.
... I have too many feelings for fictional characters...

Fabulous read.

Love it! I love the way you write Peter, May, and Tony. It's all done very well. And not over dramatic like so many of these stories tend to be. Can't wait for the final chapter!

This is lovely. And I quite like that last bit of this chapter. With the safe space and whatnot.