This is a really well-written story. I love that you have Pocahontas return to a river when she needs to think, even a river like the Thames, so different from the one she loved. I love how John Smith finds her there and the sense of hope in the final lines. Wonderful work - I'll be sharing this at my forum. :)

JohnSmithahontas forever! SCREW ROLFE! NEVER LIKED THIS GUY!

This was such an awesome birthday gift and thanks for sharing it with us! Loved the brokenness of the characters and the emotion written in the work! You are an excellent writer and we needed more great work from you thanks for doing this story! You are an great writer and excellent friend, I can't wait to see more from you! - baby26

I'm obsessed with Pocahontas & John Smith being together. This is a good story. Well written, but there are a few typos. You should just reread it and edit it and it will come out perfect.

Awww, I loved this! *sniff* such emotion! Such mistakes and love. She never should've left him, then again he never should have let her go like that. This was awesome! Made my birthday weekend complete! :) :) Loved this! Brilliant work! Who knows, maybe I'll play with this drabble? Great job! Thank you so much I really appreciate it! Thank you!