| Reviews for Crazy Web of Life |
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   Marvelcrazed chapter 5 . 10/4/2018 Good work! |
| Shadow-wolf78 chapter 5 . 6/27/2018 Interesting story so far curious to see how it goes. Please update soon thank you. |
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 5 . 5/26/2018 nice ;) |
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 4 . 5/26/2018 like this :) |
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 3 . 5/26/2018 nice ch |
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 2 . 5/26/2018 love |
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 5/26/2018 like this |
| GarnetMonsoon chapter 5 . 5/1/2018 Very interesting! I gotta admit, the first-person viewpoint narrative is a bit unusual, but not entirely bad. One criticism: If May's lung damage is bad enough to warrant a hospital stay, I don't think she'd be able to speak so easily after just waking up. I'd imagine it would take a while, and her lungs would be damaged. I'm interested to see where this goes! Tony and Peter are very in-character, and I like the flashback. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/28/2018 Heeeeyyyy, I hope you're still going to finnish this story. I'd really like to read more and btw your "the beginning" of Spidey is one the best ones I've read (yes, includind the movies' too) |
| mmgage chapter 1 . 8/23/2017 Great first chapter! I'm looking forward to more! |
| DisneyGirl10 chapter 5 . 8/23/2017 Oh gawd, poor Peter! Flashbacks are essential in storytelling, and you did well. I'm also back in school, good luck in that. |
| Thalyta-odr chapter 1 . 8/21/2017 Great chapter! I love it |
| PepperMorganStark chapter 5 . 8/21/2017 Good flashback! |
| SummerMistedDragon chapter 5 . 8/21/2017 Oh no... |
| BrieCheese16 chapter 5 . 8/21/2017 DAMnnnnnnnnnot uncle BenWell written chapter as always. Loved the flash back but looking forward to seeing it dealt with in the context of your story. Thanks! |
