this is sooo touching... i love this!

I am so glad I found this story. It's early morning here when am reading this and this is a tear jerker first thing in the morning. you're a great writer. keep it up.

Wow, such a beautiful one shot, I loved reading this gem. I'm so happy that I found this story. I love that it just takes a moment in time and scratches the surface of the aftermath of the war in such an elegant way. I reared up and loved every bit of it. Very bittersweet, wonderful work :)

Awww, this is such a touching story. I almost starting crying along with the characters when they looked at the pictures. And the end where Dennis mentions Colin as his hero was truly heartwarming. They really did lose a true talent when Colin died.

Speaking of talent, as a writer, you have a lot of it. All in all, I loved this story.

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Headmaster of Sonora Academy