haku lives.

there's always an audition when ROB reincarnating people to imaginary universe and this kid is fail on the turn he was show up

All that build-up only for the OC to tag along to Naruto's story...

I still can't get over how damn emotional this guy is it's too much for me and he acts too damn childish for a reincarnation/self insert I tried but just reading how he acts is such a turn off

Yay, finally a 3 man squad for Kaiza is complete!
Now why not send them 3 into konoha's chuunin exam and then we're golden... 3 jinchuuriki in one arena is going to be fun! Better if you make Kumo send Yugito's squad, now half of all the bijuu in one place will make Hiruzen a massive headache.

So is his kid personality overlaying his past self ?

Well that took a way diffrent turn than I was expecting . Good twist for sure.

WTF IS THIS AN SI CAUSE LITERALLY HE SAID YOUR THE GUY FROM NARUTO AT FIRST CHAP AND HE'S ACTING ALL FKIN DUMB ARGGGGGG FKIN CAPSLOCK RAGE FOR DUMB WRITING

Umm why is a grown ass guy acting like a child and being emotional and shit and attached so fast like I can see why ppl said fast paced i dont mind that but emotional attachment for an SI is weird

The pace of the story is way to fast, for example the guy doesn’t know how to fish but catches one on his first try. Than he doesn’t know how to sense chakra but manages to find it on his first try, like really?

I just had a thought, if it was the sage that sealed the three tails, then losing Isobu should not kill the protagonist. It did not kill him when the sage removed the ten tails.

Plus, he would make an Uzumaki jealous with his sealing prowess.

Y'know, I don't do many reviews and when I do it's because I think that a story's got potential or something of the sort. Also excuse my lack of manners because I've had no sleep for the past 28 hours or so. I think that for a story that you came up with to procrastinate it's pretty good. From just this first chapter the one thing I have is that the chapter length is just a bit too small though for someone still in school it's alright. Overall I believe this story may be able to become a gem within all the poorly written, edited, and just overall absurd fics posted. Then again it just comes up to your drive to update and imagination. I just hope that you don't force the story along too quickly. One last thing:

Good Luck and don't let people bring you down

an interesting concept, don't think ive seen anyone do a fic where the mc is a SI dropped into the world and adopted by a kage

I will buy you a million dollar mansion if you pair OC with Yugito

if this fic turns into OC x Mei fic I will kill myself