| Reviews for Hurt Spider-Man! |
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MsDerp chapter 16 . 4/6 I LOVE these one-shots! I try to find other "Spiderman Hurt" stories, but none of them are as good as yours! I keep coming back to these! Keep it up! |
coolchicken chapter 6 . 2/12 I don't think you can move at all immediately after waking from a coma... did I miss something? Had he already woken up and recovered and you just meant he was napping? |
Mermaid12 chapter 8 . 8/8/2019 I like how you transitioned between the present and Peter’s memories of his Uncle Ben’s death. Very well done. I don’t quite understand all of it, but that’s probably because I haven’t watched many of the Spider-Man or avengers (or marvel in general lol ;)) movies. |
KittyMelloGirl chapter 22 . 7/5/2019 You hear that? That's me sobbing... This is so good! |
EndlessGalaxies97 chapter 2 . 6/23/2019 This is a really good chapter. However, I felt the ending didn't quite fit the chapter's mood. With Tony seemingly freaking out about Peter and the poison, I feel like he wouldn't just let the kid swing right out the window. I'd think he would have personally brought him back home to make sure he was safe, and felt guilty about not being able to keep him safe given all the tools at his disposal. There were a few typos and some confusing spots as to who's speaking towards the end, but other than that pretty great. Anyways, those are just my thoughts. Looking forward to reading more. |
Guest chapter 22 . 6/11/2019 I love how Tony Stark cares about Peter so much, P.S I can't blame him for that 'cause Peter is absolutely ADORABLE! I JUST LOVE HIM! Good Job on the stories you did it's amazing. I did I tell you how much I love it. Congratulations! |
CC chapter 22 . 6/4/2019 Could you do a Peter Parker asthma fic? I love those fics but I can never find any! It could go like Tony and Peter on a mission but Peter being the idiot he is, didn't bring his inhaler and now he's having an asthma attack? Maybe he passes out? Thanks for your awesome writing! |
Sierraa chapter 22 . 6/3/2019 A Posoined Peter Parker fic please? |
PARKER chapter 22 . 6/3/2019 Hey, so I was wondering if like you could a fic where Peter gets Posoined? I never can find those. OR a tic where Peters sick and then Hydra comes and kidnaps him? Except in these like a lot of irondad and whump. Whump and angst. A lot of angst |
Guest chapter 22 . 5/21/2019 Can you make a part 2 with Peter going back? Please? It could have the resolve, sadness, everything. If you don't make another part, I understand and hope you continue writing such outstanding one-shots! |
MickeyTRN chapter 22 . 5/19/2019 Aahhhhh nothing like a nice glass of heartbreak before bed! Very emotional chapter! |
Guest chapter 22 . 5/19/2019 Oof, that was right in the feels. Amazing job! Thanks for writing! |
marteeey chapter 22 . 5/19/2019 You. Made. Me . Cry! |
Owlqueen08 chapter 22 . 5/19/2019 do you hear that? that be sobbing. Great chapter ;) |
Altea the orca chapter 21 . 5/15/2019 So I just finished reading this entire story and let me tell you... I CRIED 3 QUIZNAKING TIMES I NEVER CRY! This is unacceptable how could you just kill him off ok but seriously this is actually a great story and I love how tony and may were there to comfort him and love on him, is it weird that I imagined the whole thing with the mcu actors instead of the show? Meh who cares this story was awesome and it took me three days to finish cuz even though I have no life I’m also super busy at the same time, but every morning I couldn’t wait to get up and start reading, you did a great job and this story is definitely in my favorites |