Reviews for The Untouchable
Samuel Santillan chapter 9 . 12/10/2019
espero mas capitulos esto es muy bueno
Autismguy593 chapter 8 . 7/8/2019
Oh lord, they created an atomic bomb. God help them.
Jose19 chapter 7 . 3/22/2019
I do hate the Doviet Union as a whole both in real or fictional scenarios since I lived in dictatorship governments there is nothing like a democracy.

I consider dictatorships like a malignant tumor to be removed by force all people should have their freedoms.

The road that Naruto is taking comes from a proverb that Hell is paved with good intentions.

Lelouch might have been flawed but using the old system of the Soviet Union makes the same as Britannians.
Infernus est in animo chapter 1 . 7/11/2018
I won't keep reading further since it simply doesn't tickle my fancy, sorry about that.
From this chapter I do have to say that it seems well written and put together. The idea is solid even if I really don't see why it's a Naruto crossover, unless he gets Naruto's memories later or something. Otherwise he's just a weird Russian/Japanese kid with Naruto's face for no tangible reason.
Good writing though, even if a word or two is missing. (my assumption is that 's interpreter messed up)
45DMMMR chapter 9 . 6/20/2018
WolfWarior this guy stupid it's better stop reading his story. Because is an idiot don't know anything. Worst his lack any knowledge history. His take insult people his don't care other people hurt. I'm Slovakia too hate if you want stupid author. Oh btw author if you read this. You're a Kretén. Pica. Mater ti je kurva !.
Fortress H chapter 1 . 6/19/2018
Hi everyone. It's me, THE REAL FORTRESSHUNTER.

I just found out that a quest has been going around and using my name while talking down and/or copy and pasting either my bio or content from another fanfic.

If this guy has come into your reviews, know that it's not me if he's using my name, and don't be offended if he insults you. If his reviews bother you, do delete them, because all the things he says are either random or just not true.

Hope you all have a great summer!
Honest chapter 9 . 6/13/2018
About my review sorry for being to much honest. You have the right to hate me.
Honest chapter 9 . 6/13/2018
It's like the story become down right hill to the point you stop reading it. Naruto uzamaki is not a Russian it's a Japanese named and it's suppose to be a Japanese half/anything except you do a magic. The story is Good but still not Good. There are many issue of this story. I don't think this story is good to story. Especially the personality of naruto become OOC. In a crossover you suppose not to alter change any important event of the story. It's has so messy cannot understand you point to this fanfic,

Lelouch and suzaku are not villain this story. Despite there being jerk in some level. They still to be respected Characters. Because they have very important role to the story. I'm mean all of the original cast of code geass verse should not replace by your shitty lame OOC/naruto character,

So question will naruto have geass or not?
Umbral Crow chapter 9 . 6/13/2018
Ehhhhhh, not a fan of mid story crossover events, especially if it’s meant to cross into your own story. You’re the writer but take a bit of advice from this lowly reviewer and keep the crossovers to a pair instead of a trio.
Xebolous-1 chapter 9 . 6/12/2018
OH man!
Guest chapter 9 . 6/11/2018
It's still bad both bad The Untouchable and Watch fox are same failure you throught from the past. It's has no different. You still failed bring a good plot this story. The failure you deliver this story is the same failure has repeat again it's no fun read this story. Major issue some the important cast of Code geass has become some side Characters with no reason. Naruto Europia/Russian. No matter naruto uzamaki is japanese named it's suppose naruto uzamaki is japanese Britannian for example. But you made him again in OOC/Shity characters again. To chapter 1-9 there are no improvement even character development even domino effect A.K.A batter fly effect. The only thing I read is replace lelouch to naruto main protagonist instead him. You so Suppose not replace lelouch all major character of the original cast. This story shitty garbage. Even you continue this fanfic will be continue. You still fail to this story,
Guest chapter 9 . 6/11/2018
Why only 10 FEET tall? That doesn't sound like the tallest knightmare ever, not by a long shot.
s.k.f.f.f chapter 7 . 6/11/2018
love the eastern euro, f**k the EU and the elites lol. go visegrad!
s.k.f.f.f chapter 5 . 6/11/2018
would love to see famous Russian Soviets oc in harem, doesn't make for Brittany women to be in it.
s.k.f.f.f chapter 4 . 6/11/2018
I can't say for sure. is it Russia or Soviet union? or both
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