Aye mate its fine your health is what comes first. I just really hope you dont end this story but i dont want you to rush it. Take your time mate no ones rushing you

Same goes to you to stay safe.

Remember man, the safety of the author is the priority

We can wait , stay safe , hope everything works out .

No worries real life always takes precedence, update when you can, and stay safe out there.

Your health and safety comes first, dude. It's all good.

don't whorry, i wish you good luck

Take your time on it

another great chapter tho i don't see how Brook would've heard about Gasparde I don't think Gasparde is THAT old haha

I meant to only review when I reached the last chapter, but I felt compelled to leave a review here.

First, this is a very good take of a Memory Fic. You put your own 'canon' into the story instead of following the manga/anime directly and it's interesting seeing a romantic take. Mines and other Memory Fics tend to be pure friendship.

The Straw Hats have very good reaction throughout the story and give interesting takes on events. I think my only criticisms on this aspect are that Robin is a bit more emotional than she usually is (although, this could just be an aspect from the previous stories you wrote), Brook gets almost no lines and when he does talk he doesn't really add anything, Blizzard also doesn't really talk much to the point that I often forget that he exists, and you didn't really tell us much about Star other her being a caring mother. While Star was only around for a few chapters since Luffy talks to his mother her feeling underdeveloped really stands out. But these are minor gripes that can be addressed.

Finally, don't let anyone get you down about your story. As someone who had more than a few people who hated my story (mostly for the dark undertones and how I developed Zoro) you have to write for yourself first and foremost. This is your story and you're just sharing it for the rest of us to enjoy. Hope you keep writing and keep at it.

This chapter was great, Nami drunk and her interactions with Luffy were soo good. Look to the end of Skypiea one of best arcs!

Something tells me that when Nami wakes up and sees she's on top of Luffy, she'll presume he tried to "take advantage of her" and beat him senseless.

In which case, Aika won't feel too pleased

One step closer to getting done with Skypiea! :D

Awesome work keep it up!

I can't wait to see Aika's reaction to when Nami cries with joy at Luffy coming to save her