Oh my poor little Timmy. I almost cried. Good job!

I hate Tim’s parents so much!

This is really well written! Your Tim voice is lovely. I like all the little details of his day and the shock and joy of his parents being home. I like to imagine that he has a good time at the party.

Well, in the end is something sad. Tim's parents were horrible people :(

Aww so cute. I'm loving this week

I love it! Poor Tim, though... This could make a very interesting multi-chaptered story if you wanted it to, though it's awesome the way it is. Thanks for sharing!