this is good...I like the banter of the two main characters...and the teasing of other Kiyoshi warriors members are cute and hilarious...but I think you forgot kiyi, Ursa and noren to join the party and when they got home...

Aww, that kiss was great. I usually don't like drunk kisses but this was both hilarious and sweet cause Suki was sober and Zuko was just all cute and happy on cactus juice haha. I like how he felt bad too and kept apologizing, that seemed very in character. Nicely done :)