Damn now I have the feels.

Feliz navidad! Espero que la historia continue

Almost wished that you paralleled the opening of the curtains in Kuu's room when Kyoko entered the room. I totally could see that in my mind. Would make the fact that he didn't respond even more clenching because she would be expecting (or at least hoping) for the soft acknowledgement of her being there.

Personally, I love nonstandard pairings if given a good reason for them happening (course, Kyoko and Hikaru is my fav of the non-standard) so I like seeing other ones. Glad you decided to share one.

Looking forward to more.

I can totally see Kyoko and her panic attack with such horrible news. Glad you gave her someone to take her to Lory to wait for the oh so emotional information.
Great description of Kuu lamenting his loss of his son.

Very interesting idea! Thank you for making an effort and not going cannon - although I have to say I kind of miss Ren in this scenario since these are his parents; so I hope you include him after the initial introduction to your story. I love your style of writing and your creativity. I'm very thankful to you for sharing this alternativ storylines with us and I'd write one myself if I weren't such a lousy writer that cannot complete even something as simple as a one-shot.
I'm excited for this story, because I can feel the drama coming up.

Me gusta definitivamente! Lo leí todo y en ningún momento me aburri prácticamente la escena se creó en mi cabeza.

Can I say I love you? This makes me want to tear my heart out and that a pretty hard feat for me to even she tears. I know that this is going to be a long ass time for anything to happen but I'm so glad to find rare pairings that you write. Sorry it not really focus on the story itself for this review.

I really like it, can't wait for a update :-D
And finally found someone that can think outside the box(pairing) and dish it out to.(Because everyones thinking about it but can never put it out)
You know I like canon and all but its get real interesting when its non-Common characters with main characters (in harems I always route for the underdogs).

I really like this story. Looking forward to reading the rest. Good job. 8)

Wait, was this inspired by the author of Jump Pulse? I know she had a one shot in her series of one shots pairing Kyouko with every male under the sun and this was one of them. I can't wait to see where you take this plot bunny! I soooo wanted to see that particular one shot turned into a series so thanks a bunch!

Can't wait for the next chapter. I love the Hizuri family. Keep up the good job.

Wonderful start. I'm looking forward to reading more. 8)

I love ️ this plot! Great start and you already have me on the edge of my seat.

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I'm looking forward to reading this. I always love reading about different pairings for kyoko, and kuu is one of my favourite characters. Thanks. Xx

Me gusta tu estilo, esperando el siguiente capitulo n.n