| Reviews for Do Over |
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   anyone675 chapter 3 . 12/26/2019 A shame that you don't plan on continuing this its quite good |
| TTGG03 chapter 3 . 12/3/2018 Awesome. |
| EvilPopcorn chapter 3 . 10/20/2017 Oh my, I absolutely love this. Time travel is always fun to read but you executed this amazingly. I feel so bad for all the time travellers and hiccup! Poor toothless too! He must be so confused that a random human smells like a queen and his other half ! Aww, hiccup really didnt make a good first impression by yelling at him. I really hope you update this fic soon! I would love to see what happens next in either timelines! |
| PutMoneyInThyPurse chapter 3 . 9/2/2017 okay, to paraphrase your hiccup: Enough, Raberba! Get over yourself and UPDATE. (seriously, because. my heart. I can't. pleeeeeeeeeeeeeez?) |
| MM chapter 3 . 7/27/2017 Aaaaaah! Oh no! It's always the people we love the most who we can't imagine to be strange and hurt the most. I don't know how he will convince Toothless. I liked your description of Snotlout. He is so much softer (and yes, even sensible) than he would ever believe himself and he trusts Hiccup fully (secretly, of course). |
| MM chapter 1 . 7/27/2017 Wow! Really glad to read from you again! And this looks like the start of a great story. My mind is constructing ways of how things would go from here. Without his feats to prove to the others what he is capable of and Toothless' friendship, would Hiccup be able to accept friendships and tasks that to him would seem to be thrust uopn him out of the blue? |
| Gust chapter 3 . 7/26/2017 I really like this! I'm interested to see what you got next! |
| UniLiliCornia chapter 3 . 7/26/2017 Ooooh so interesting, this one. |
| Tybolt Silver chapter 3 . 7/25/2017 These are great. You should do something bigger with these. I particularly liked chapter 3. It's different from ordinary time-travel/amnesia stories because 1) it's not just one haracter affected 2) Hiccup needs to deal with a lot of people a time once rather than one 3) interesting choice of characters to lose their memories. |
| SidheWolf5 chapter 3 . 7/25/2017 Oh my Thor! Having it go both ways...! You are evil! And a genius! Yes! You are an evil genius! Truly spectacular! (Aren't you glad...even secretly...that you decided to continue this? I know I am!) |
| Reverie chapter 3 . 7/25/2017 This is absolutely amazing even if you call it a rough draft! Craaah I can't wait for more v (And also need to log back into my proper account already so I can see replies xvx) |
| Reverie chapter 2 . 7/25/2017 I love how you're representing the perspective of Toothless, I think it's perfectly balanced with the intelligence he seemed to have and yet the limits of his complex thought due to him still being a separate animal. |
| Jokermask18 chapter 3 . 7/24/2017 Another great chapter. May I offer suggestions for the next scenario? |
| Queen Bovine chapter 3 . 7/24/2017 Oh, goodness, Berba, only you could write a fic like this that allows for the character's actual personalities to come into play. Most anybody else would've had Stoick be such an OOC jerk here, but I'm so freaking glad he's not. I am ready for the pain! And the bromance! Bring it on! |
| CajunBear73 chapter 3 . 7/24/2017 I hope I don't need a scorecard to keep up with who's persona is in which time-line...this is getting so much the headache to keep up with...LOL! Stoick's been brought 'up to speed', Astrid's really breaking Hiccup's heart, and Toothless is like a dagger at his heart... CB73 |
