Reviews for Instincts
Bob chapter 1 . 9/10/2019
Ending. SO. FLUFFING. ADORABLE!
Betenowaru chapter 2 . 4/19/2019
A NUMBER 10 SO COOT Cant contain

HOI IM TEMMIE AM AND THAT CUTE BUT TEM CUTER REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2018
im crying holy crap XD
Mikazuki Mitsukai chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
OMGGGGGGGGG! I'M SO HAPPY! This is just too cute! And no one can help Ed cope with anxiety better tham the Flame Alchemist himself! But this makes me think a bit, too: won't Al develop something like this too if only he had the body for it? I mean, Ed wasn't the only one trying human transmutation...
darkraistlyn chapter 2 . 4/4/2018
Did you make this a full story? I would love to see more of it.
thestaffofra chapter 1 . 3/19/2018
I loved this story! Thank you so much for sharing it!
Alice chapter 1 . 3/9/2018
I love it so so much. Keep goin.
Shiloh Moon chapter 3 . 3/6/2018
Eek! What's wrong with Edo?

This is dragging on a bit longer than I expected. Nonetheless, it's nice getting to see Ed with his walls down. Even if he is completely out of it. I'd like to see him get better soon, so Ed can realize what's been going on and strap in for COMPLETE AND UTTER EMBARRASSMENT! *evil laugh* Ah, yes. That sounds fantastic.

I can't wait for the next update! :)
Shiloh Moon chapter 2 . 3/6/2018
Awww! So CUTE! Poor Roy had to deal with a sick Edo! XD

I can't exactly sympathize with Ed, though. I haven't been sick like that in years. I think I've only had a fever about twice in my entire life. Sooo... yeah. I can't speak for accuracy, but this sounded pretty realistic.

I like how delirious Ed was for this one. And how casual he was about his symptoms. Also, that weird little conversation about the tea and his mom. That was especially nice to read. People like to portray Ed as this big tough-guy who's a big softy behind his walls, but sometimes he really does lower his walls. Like in the FMAB anime, during the Tucker incident he cries in anguish as he nearly kills Shou. And after when he shouts to the sky that they're only human. Ed's not afraid to act his age and show emotion every once in a while. I had no trouble imagining this kind of conversation in canon. Even if he was a little out of it due to his condition.

Very nice, overall. Now I just need to read chapter 3. :)
Shiloh Moon chapter 1 . 3/6/2018
That... is exactly what a panic attack feels like. Wow. You really hit the nail right on the head. The breathing, the thoughts, the hot temperatures bothering him, and the shaking. Yes, there is a LOT of uncontrollable shaking. Just... wow. Have YOU had a panic attack before?

This was pleasantly accurate. Not to mention if Edo would have any mental disorders I'm sure it would be anxiety. Usually I see authors putting too much emphasis on the rocking back and forth. I mean, sure, there is SOME of that, but that's not all. Not even close. Nicely done.

And poor Roy, not knowing how to help. XD Having another person with you is helpful, yes, but ultimately the person having the attack needs to sort things out on their own. It took me a long time, but I finally found a method that works for me: the glass box method. Where you imagine the thoughts that are bothering you are inside a glass box, where they can't hurt you or even touch you. Because they CAN'T. There's a lot more to it than that, but that's the gist of it.

Overall, you did a fantastic job. I can't wait to read the other drabbles you have attached to this story. Expect more reviews. :)
Andipandi5 chapter 3 . 3/6/2018
Awww! Roy is so sweet! Poor Edward!
AnotherObsessedTeen chapter 3 . 3/6/2018
I'm loving this. Can't wait to see what Hawkeye does!
The Teeta Monster chapter 2 . 2/22/2018
While Roy is making the tea, it talks about how he “knows how to castrate a wound.” I’m pretty sure you meant “cauterize.” To castrate something is to cut off its penis. I don’t think Roy knows how to do that.
NekoTora243 chapter 1 . 9/15/2017
I would love a part two! This is adorable, to say the least and I'd love to see how Roy will behave towards Edward now that he's seen him with his shields down.
emmahoshi chapter 1 . 8/7/2017
what a nice story ! and yeah it would be nice to have a second chapter just to read how embarrassed ed is when he wake up and realize what roy has done. thank you
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