I only read the first chapter but I have to say it wasn’t as interesting as I thought, you just made hinata so unloyal. Supposedly she loves naruto but she tries to court Shino into marriage just because he’s gay, and then she has to marry sasuke and if she doesn’t she gets disowned. And for some reason she only has one chance at escaping so she does it on the day she already got married? That was her only chance? Was she locked up or something? And ofcourse no one deserves to get raped and tho thats a huge problem, I don’t see why she didn’t allow herself to get disowned.

did you remove half of chapter 1 for reason?

This is disgusting people don’t fall in love with their rapist and your idiotic attempt to take the blame away from him by having “daddy made me do it” as an excuse is moronic Sasuke is still the one who raped and abused her

The story is so interesting! It's during WW1 maybe...

The way you turned hinata's hate to love(maybe not yet) towards sasuke was understandable. I'm glad hinata knew sasuke's position to not disrespect him as it would only harm them both.

I never though that this would be kind of dark with those killings and lol pedo orochimaru. Hinata is not pathetic at all. She could kick ass.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Senpai what have thou done to my poor fragile heart? Poor me had some misgivings about dear Sasuke for dishonoring our lady at the beginning, but my poor heart went out to him as the story unravelled. He shan't be easily forgiven, but oh senpai! Hailed be the knots you have tied in my poor being!

And how can the lovely discourse between Naruto and Hinata be not heeded? Their mellow conversation brought us to a time of yore where chaperoned ladies and chivalrous gentlemen still graced upon this land.

Oh! Woe is me. If thou shalt no update this story in the forseeable future, my poor, poor fragile heart will be shattered into uncountable million pieces.

Please update soon

When the next update

Sorry I have no good things to say about this story. If this is Sasuhina say so in the description. What you are doing is tricking the reader into reading a Sasuhina story under the guise of Naruhina.

I'll be here waiting for updates. The fic isn't that good & polished but I really like the plot. I hope this doesn't discourage you or make you rewrite the whole story. I think you'll do do better with time. I love that the theme is mature. Hinata's characterization is great

Glad to see that Moegi was able to escape with Choji but she will be haunted for the rest of her life, not to mention Hinata. Will they meet up again in the future? What about Zetsu? Did anyone investigate his death and link it to Hinata?

Don't be discouraged and sway be negative review/opinions. There a lot of crazy shippers. Write the way you want it to be. If they do not like it, than they should not be reading it.

Do not know if this is supposed to be Naruhina or that gay shit Sasuhina but like wtf. Don't mean to flame but how the fuck can you have someone love their rapist? It makes no sense what's so ever. For Hinata to come to terms and love Sasuke even after the rape is just unrealistic and makes me sick. Also, what's the point of even having Naruto if you're going to lead him into shit anyways? I can see as this for potential drama but still. You should really bring in Naruto next chapter because, this is fucked up.

You can see that you favor sasuke Even after what he does hinata Naruto had worse in manga You are doing with hinata easy girl to seduce easy

pathetic False no sense When it comes to hinata

Without paintings it is pathetic hinata manipulated by sasuke words if you want to do sasuhina it In this story after rape abuse constraint This is disgusting and realistic it means np You are in the place of some character what do you do love person rape rapist abuse constraint Rather not I would kill a bastard hate This story should be naruhina