Come on. I need to see (figuratively) Crow’s reaction to Becky’s sleepwear!

This is so amazingly written! Great Job! I really would like to see an expansion of them .

Hero’s lament expansion

We could see mayapple fight against Mackborg

Wait at the end that means crow won the bet last chapter when do we get to read about that.

im just here to "see" the sercretary in pijamas.
but i have to say that the "rules" are pretty fun

Well this does end pretty open. and honestly im more interested in romance but this still is a great story. i however would wish that crow would be able to ... use words to get blue on his side.

FINE i will give you my thought.
I THINK that you are a lovable person and nobody should tell you otherwise.
I also like this Start very close to the original story but giving it something extra.
I also am a fan of the pairing if it does come true but hey maybe she doesnt like him right ?
there is plenty of princesses to choose from. : )
basically no matter what happens you wont disapoint me.

Oh wow...
that was amazing! Thank you for writing extra content for the fandom, there’s just not enough and I can’t write at all. The way you write is amazing, and I hope you write more if you still have it in you!

Still thank you for the Amazing Nefarious content!

JUST UPDATE ALREADY

Plz continue this chapter with the rest of the game in reading form of you want to

Woah, where have I been? ahem.

Firstly, I loved the build up into the 'Final Battle'; Showing how Macks' fall from grace had gradually turned him into an anti-hero. Good move there, makes me wish he could make things right with Mayapple though; I half-expected her to show up and slap him.
Second, The tense moments of the battle defiantly show that 'This is no longer a game.' That sort of thing. When a fallen hero falls, They 'faaalllllll'. (no pun intended)
Thirdly, Classic clash in the sky sent a wave of nostalgia my way. Nostalgia is, after all, the supporting boards of the foundations of Nefarious.
Fourth, Come on Becky! just kiss him already!

Excellent chapter, and hope to read more from you soon.

I honestly did not think you would continue this story im glad you updated it.

(Takes hat off)Hello! Im The Elemental Hat!(Fire comes out of Fire hat) Newest Villian with power to use different hats to have different elemental powers!(Put snow hat on and freezes stuff) (clears throat) Anyway just wanted to get my name out there and to give a suggestion about a new one-shot I need to see childhood story bub got? Good! Tootaloo! Hope you like my villian :)

Can you update please?

Could you type the next chapter saying about when CROW was about to invade macro city with his army he saw MACK flying towards his ship still wearing black armor and when MACK got to CROW's ship he tried to kill CROW but kept dodging the slashes and after a few battles in the mech room and BECKY's office MACK blasted CROW out on to the outside of the ship and when MACK was about to kill CROW he got punched away from CROW with his sword still in his hand he saw MAY APPLE helping CROW up to his feet and the color on the middle of MACK's sword turned from blue to red and flew towards CROW and MAY APPLE to kill them but they kept dodging his slashes till CROW and MAY APPLE punched MACK so hard he flew out of macro city not to be seen again (till if you want to make another chapter of this another time if you want) and when CROW's army and BECKY came out to congratulate them CROW and MAY APPLE fell to the ground knocked out and then you type in (a few days later) CROW woke up turning his head to the left to see MAY APPLE next to him which made him remember the day MAY APPLE helped CROW take out MACK and then when he was wandering why MAY APPLE always keeps wear her left glove on he took it off and saw something very shocking MAY APPLE's left arm is robotic and when CROW saw why MAY APPLE always keeps it on he decides to wait a few weeks till he can ask her about the arm (so what do you think about the chapter I thought of)