This story is great jeep going

Seriously the alteration you keep making to the story are in the long run boring.

Barris wanted the Jedi order to abandon the war not reform.

You can’t turn non force sensitive individuals to the dark side. To “fall” you must be able to feel the force and techniques to dominate the mind we’re lost.

Ah, Insurrection, such an underrated Star Trek movie...

Channeling your inner Picard huh? Aren’t you getting the two franchises mixed up?

So palpys a voyeur now, eh? Wow

This is an impressive story.

Oh no HE'S coming! Damn good chapter as usual.

I really like this story! XD

Please continue, your story is very enthralling.

I'm sorry, but I use an online translator because of my poor English. The song at the beginning of this Chapter reminded me of a song about our Russian army. It is called "invincible and legendary". Were you inspired?

Good

When i saw this couldn’t stop laughing die to the pun. "That gives a whole new meaning to the phrase 'dressed to kill'," Obi-Wan remarked. Goo thus far i haven’t noticed any mistakes thus far and i dare say im famos for pointing out grammer mistakes.

Wow! Another AMAZING chapter! I Love the way Barris' relationship with Ruvino is growing. She really does care for him. As Barris remembers the way she slaughtered so many Jedi she's also comes to a realization that she could never be as EVIL as the Emperor. As she recalled the way she felt compassion for Vos' baby son. Now that Emperor Palpatine is suspicious about Everyone.. He has to be for Evil people always need to watch their backs. The way Ruvino and Mora are becoming more involved with each other it's evident that they are in Love. They remind me of Anakin and Padme when they first got together and fell in Love. The cliffhanger at the end made my heart clinch for now I want to know what happened to Queen Servena? I guess I will wait for the next update.
I'm Loving this story. :D