Really good and all characters are in character yet different but a good different I hope for more

I really enjoy your book and I think you a brilliant writer! I really sincerely hope that you will continue it soon, so I can enjoy what happens next! The journey has only just begun after all.

I just reread this story again, I hope you update this one day it is really great.

shame this clearly isnt getting updated...

THIS IS AMAZIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING! But it's been roughly a year and a half, and we're only halfway through the story. Howsabout an update of any kind (abandonment notice, new chapter, author note, etc.) by Christmas, just so I and everybody else who's discovered and loved this fic knows what'll happen. OK? OK.

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The only complaint that I have is that Nymeria acts more like a direwolf-shaped human than she does a canine. Otherwise, I like this.

I must admit that I find that last line Galadriel throws out to be extremely annoying. Arya's not thinking of romance, that line should not be said - it implies that the only thing every woman wants is to 'find love' - and it just rubs me the wrong way. Yeah, it's fine to eventually give a character who is not actively seeking romance a partner eventually (although I prefer for that not to happen) but to have characters in the novel comment in any sort of way that they will eventually find someone... the choice of wanting a partner ought to be on the individual's terms, not from peer pressure and comments from outside sources.

'The [Crebain] whimpered...'

I would advise against using wimpered for a bird. You seem to be mixing up the communication of different species - canines and humans whimper, birds flatten their feathers, pin their eyes (rapidly expand and contract the pupil) and cower. I recommend researching the behaviour of whatever species you add in - or their closest real world counterpart - to just give a bit more authenticity.

Some corrections I'd like to make:

Young wolves are called pups, not cubs.

Wolves never have sharply defined markings - coat colours always blend into each other. A wolf with defined markings (like the white patch you described) are either wolfdogs or wolfish looking dogs like huskies or malamutes. Unless clearly defined markings are meant to be another warg characteristic? (Which I wouldn't recommend; IIRC, white markings are linked with tameness and domestication.)

Wolves also behave very differently to the more dog-like portrayal that you've written here. Although, this can be excused due to these wolves presumably not having been hunted to near extinction. One thing I don't like, however, is how you have used the 'yip in agreement to the name' trope - it's just so overdone, you know? And wolves are actually very quiet creatures and i would imagine wargs to be too - being vocal is a big disadvantage if you don't want to alert everything nearby to your presence.

I do recommend researching wolf behaviour - I imagine direwolves (and wargs too, I suppose) to act almost exactly like the wolves of our world, just less shy, more readily aggressive, more curious and more intelligent.

It would be nice if you updated. Thanks.

I don't have a perfect knowledge of A Song of Ice and Fire, nor time to finish reading this story now. But... WOW, this is GOOD! I'm floored and hooked! If any more chapters come out I will be VERY happy! Write on!

Like your story so far it made me laught a quit few times. Hope you will comeback to updating, but this party with Arya being presented as a princess and with crown, made me fill cringy.

continue and update arya remove heel shoes and go barefoot before they return her she get boromir to leave straight to gondor stop his father (she tell him about palantir and how sauron controll his father by manipulation)merry and pipin is still captured when to save rest fellowship lead most orcs after war of ring probaly as queen of gondor with dunedean longlivity(valars tell her in dream)return into westrons reform westrons save wildman north from wall prepare land to atack night when after little time in minas tirith arya get haircut short probaly pixie cut. and idea she save theodred and later become queen of rohan ..as queen of rohan or gondor she have power change westron to better.,

This story has potential but the whole elf arya thing ruins the story as well as aragorn not being paired with arwen

Thanks for the story, it is amazing so far.