Awesomeness

what is it with lean black haired protagonists. Harry potter, Percy Jackson, minato sahashi, need I go on
it's not teasing, it's pain

isn't ashikabi reed pipe or something of the sort

HarryIt's not that I'm gay, I'm just asexual" YOU, you planned for him to be 6 just like homura didn't you, DIDNT YOU!

please, dear gods, don't make harry say "decent sort of people", i'm getting horrifying flashbacks to the Dursleys.

I had expected stronger Harry. Because he is interdimensional agent of "The Death". If he can't deal with some aliens then what is the point of sending him to other universes.

I did not see this coming. Very cool.

I like this Agent of Death theme. Do you know of any other stories along this theme? Cannot wait to read more!

That is very, VERY suspicious. Please update as soon as possible.

Kuno can’t handle her Norito.

Karasuba is a total bitch!

Kuu is just to cute.

Harry cares about his sekirei.

Talk about painful, and awkward!

I like the story, I just can't like where the story is headed. I mean I hate stories in which huge secrets barely last a couple chapters. Things like identities or special powers should be treated as such- and when I see the author disregard any notion of secrecy, I lose a lot of respect for the characters and the content of work.

I also really dislike the way you treat the agency of the sekirei. Powerful aliens designed to mate for life with their destined partner. I think these characters have the most potential in the story, and you use none of it. The way you treat Benni is as if she's just a generic sekirei- or the blasé way you show Karsubsa can just accept a weaker partner after a very intense reaction is really off putting. There's no deeper feeling or emotion about these characters, and you can easily let by the way Harry treats Benni.

Harry doesn't even know Benni's powers, how the bond works on a metaphysical and emotional level, or even her history. He's willing to physically be close to her, but that whole interaction isn't romantic in any sense of the word.

I also thought the way you threw Kunno into the story was super lazy and very poorly written. Benni goes to some random area and saves a girl who stays asleep for a while till she wakes up and gets winged by Harry. C'mon now. Like where is the mystery or intrigue? I mean there's more feeling in naming an mmo character than I see here.

I also think forcing Miya and Minnato into the story was a clear concession on your part. I mean you go from agents of death plot to being involved directly into the hot bed mess that is the anime plot. Like it wasn't even subtle or anything- it just seemed half-assed and awkward. I mean Harry doesn't seem to have the awareness of the risks he's taking- "magic is a secret, but if I get into trouble that's my escape plan" like what? How do you just casually reveal a trump card like that for no gain? It's just strategically unsound, and as a war survivor Harry would know that.

So I mean other than secrets that aren't, bland characters, and all conflicts that seem to be resolved effortlessly your story seems alright. I mean the whole "there's video of a normal guy doing magic subplot is fine because the director is protecting him" was fucking stupid, but whatever. That what this story feels like, a big fucking whatever.