So... I feel like Oko could use some character development I guess? I mean I know it’s still early in the story, but I feel like she’s been angry at the world since the beginning and I almost feel like you’re trying to make her into a mini-Vegeta. Also, why does she hate Bulma on the spot... Bulma never gave her a reason to be hated but she seems to tolerate Chichi, atleast. Just some insight is all!

Great Job on the story. I really liked it. I'll admit, I was skeptical at first because honestly speaking I am not a fan of FemOCs in Dragonball fanfics. I am just not a fan of them either ending up with Vegeta who I liked specially his Tsundere tendencies with Bulma. Piccolo who can reproduce Asexually, which is fucking weird that he ends up with a FemOC. Gohan, similar to Vegeta really that it is just hard to see him with anyone else other than Videl. Lastly, Goku I admit I am biased. I never really liked the Guy, I wasn't expecting him to be jntelligent justbknpwledgable enough to fulfill his role as husband and father. Then it just pisses me off that Chichi is hated due to her nagging etc. when Goku is the main problem in their relationship. It just becomes weird when a FemOC ends up with him when the guy isIlike that. Goku Black I can understand but Universe 7 Goku? Nah unless FemOC made him an actual husbqnd and father. Anyways, back to the fic, I love how Oko managed to make Goku still be his Idiotic Muscle Headed self, at the same time be a god Father and Husband and not the disappointment that he is in the show. Chichi is the best here, Oko just filled up that hole Goku tends to leave that made Chichi who was in the Anime. Yes, she still acts the same but ateasts in here, it shows that she is only lloking after the well being of her family and can be reasoned with or is reasonable. Anyways keep up the good work and hopefully this characterization continues in the future.

This story is so good so far! I have a question, but is Oko’s and Vegeta’s relationship going to get better? I really do like their relationship and I just to see them reconile. Anyways, great story so far, and I can’t wait for more chapters :D

Ok kinda off topic but I was playing DB Xenoverse 2 and saw Beerus loves pudding! And I remember the chapter in which Oko said she loves pudding! That's going to be an interesting meeting in the future xD

I ship Gohan and Oko so much! I've already read the story three time but this will always be one of my favorite chapters. I love the Okohan/Goko hug scene and protective dad Vegeta! Keep up the good work!

Great chapter dude. As q sugestion have Vegeta stay and kill Jeice before helping Goku fight against Gyniu.. As a sugestion have Vegeta kill Gyniu before he could use body swap .
By the way, up in checking out my and review it ?

I think you should deviated, from the story meaning like while there are new characters, new dialouge the story keeps progressing the same way. Make something different, instead of vegeta leaving maybe he could stay with goku, and he could be the one that gets body swapped, it would be intresting seing oko's reaction.

EXCELLENT WORK CANT WAIT FOR MORE

Great!

Aeeeeee mais capítulos

My favorite thing about Krillin is destructo disc, thought he needs better aim.

change 2 full bloods to purebloods which is the right term.

Yay Goku is here and recoome is about 2 ger fuck

AWESOME WORK CANT WAIT FOR MORE

Nicely done