please update soon

Cafpow? Really? Luna and Abby? Disaster in the making. Ah, but what a beautiful fall.

This is really fun! I really hope to see more.

please let Thane live in the end but if Tobis says that its time for him to go, then alright lol

Hope you continue this is amazing

When will you update this story?

This is a pretty good story so far, and I'm enjoying it! Also, you may want to fix the beginning of the Summary.

I love the premise and the story is very well written. However, while the formatting with the targets was novel at first, it made no real sense by the middle of chapter 2 and is just starting to become irritating by chapter 3, since it adds nothing to the story apart form artificially fracturing the scenes and making it harder to read fluently.

This is a really fun fanfiction and I love the camaraderie between the sisters and how they make up for each other's weaknesses! Can't wait to see how their relationship with the Normandy crew evolves! Please keep up the great work!

:D I love this. just... I love this.

I love this! As for a prompt, I kinda wanna see Harry jump off a building in order to kill someone. I just really wanna see those flying skills from her first life put to good use. Maybe pull a Wronski Feint with a shuttle? :D

You are amazing!

So will they listen to Thane and Sheppard and how soon before they start working together.

it is awesome that her friends are with her on what they are going to do to help their world

I am glad that she is getting a chance to be reborn and not be expected to be the hero.